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tennisprincess
Senior Writer

 Gender:  Age: 13 Joined: 03 Apr 2008 Posts: 118 Reviews: 90 Country: Vagonia Land 300 Points
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Posted: Sun May 04, 2008 7:52 pm Post subject: I want to Critique, (I give very long ones) |
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Post away!
I would like to hear anything...
But again; I would prefer poetry or short stories as that's my number one area.
Uhmm.. what else do I have to say..?
I'm a pretty sweet person when I crit but if I just plainly dislike something I won't be kind about it. I'll let you know my opinion.
Please, Please, Please remember you don't have to take my suggestions. Go with your heart when editing and what YOU feel sounds best. However; you may want to look over your crits at least a few times. That's something every good writer should remember.
In exchange for my crits if you had the time it'd be nice of you to review some of my work and perhaps post your comments on it. Although, you don't HAVE to. It's on a voluntary basis.
Also, I love having friends so add me. And, Pm's make me smile so PM me!
So foegt to include a link when you tell me to crit something in your post please.
Thanks for reading,
TP. |
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chocoholic
Give me the chocolate and nobody gets hurt Master of the Forum

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 31 May 2007 Posts: 1614 Reviews: 516 Country: Raxacoricofallapatorius 1605 Points
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 1:31 am Post subject: |
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I have a song that wants more critiques, would you be willing to do that for me?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28448.html
I'll definetely add you to my friends. |
_________________ *Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry* |
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Matt Bellamy
Tech Monkey Master of the Forum


Age: 20 Joined: 08 Dec 2004 Posts: 1868 Reviews: 302 Country: England 330 Points
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CK Lynn
Novelist

 Gender:  Age: 13 Joined: 18 Jan 2007 Posts: 335 Reviews: 211 Country: United States 300 Points
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28832.html
A poem of mine. One of the better ones I've written (though that isn't saying much). |
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Rei
E.A. Extraordinaire Epic Novelist

 Gender:  Age: 23 Joined: 01 Feb 2005 Posts: 3140 Reviews: 685 Country: Canada 300 Points
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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*waves her hand around and bounces up and down* Me want crits!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30070.html
That's my latest post of the novel I'm writing. Each post has a link to the previous entries. |
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Muteman
Junior Writer
 Gender:  Age: 17 Joined: 11 May 2008 Posts: 33 Reviews: 14 Country: United States 300 Points
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 1:01 am Post subject: |
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| Eh, only got 3 things up at the moment in the ol' portfolio, but take your pic I suppose. |
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