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Iheartu
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 1:40 am Post subject: Indevor-a band story |
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(I will put this through spell check later whenI get a chance...)
INDEVOR
Indervor is a made up band for a simlpe fun band problematic everyday life...so....um if any bands out there want to give any funny or serious storys of your band i'd be happy to include them in my little chapters so...well...ya. My frineds will proble be the ones always at the begining of the chapters so ya um...I'll get to discribing the charaters now...
CHARACTERS
@Shojin+
-Guitarist
-lanky
-motivated worker
-fun to be around
-strait hair that reaches middle of back
@Mint aka-Mintari+
-Drummer
-Guitarist
-charming
-spikky hair
-good looks
-lots of fan girls
@Josolin+
-Singer
-motivated
-punked out
-straight hair that barly reaches shoulders
@Maria+
-Song writter
-Singer
-Drummer
-short
-more talanted than she will tel about...
-straight hair that's thiner than her other band members
-always has a head band in her hair
-looks misterious
@Shio+
-Singer
-Guitarist
-more of a skater
-long hair that isn't always straight...
SONG NAMES I HAVE SO FAR
+A rift
+Identity
+Don't look away
+Saving you
+Find yourself
+Up^
+Trick
+Caught
(But trust me not all the songs will be up there so...) |
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 3:03 am Post subject: |
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Posted: Sun May 04, 2008 2:20 am Post subject: |
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Good luck writing the story; I was writing one called "Keep it Cool" and it's on the Advanced Critiques page...It's difficult to write something about music.
But in no way should you let that discourage you from doing it. Good luck again. |
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:30 pm Post subject: |
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Sometimes, I think about writing a band story, but I keep thinking that it'll be too boring. Remember to actually have a conflict that is present throughout the book, like financial difficulties, or the threeat of being dropped by their record label.
Unless you're talking about a teen band or something, because that'd be completely different.
Anyway, I would reccomend actually writing the songs, so you can get a better idea of what they would be doing and such. If songwriting isn't your calling, I'd be glad to write them, but you might want to get a more experienced songwriter than me. I have enxt to no experience, but if you're interested, you can check out the first(and only) song I've wrote called The Unchained Melody. It really doesn't show my ability to write fun songs, unfortunetly.
As for our personal band stories, I am not in a band. I seriously stink at playing instruments, and I have next to no singing experience. I am interested in taking vocal lessons later on, but I seriously have no hope of singing at my age. My voice would crack when I'm performing  |
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Iheartu
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:37 pm Post subject: |
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Actually I do have the whole 1st ch. up.
I have written songs I just haven't posted them. Some of them are my freinds'>.<
I desided that every ch will have a diffrent problem like episodes... |
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:57 pm Post subject: |
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ya I do have to say most of them are mine. But o-well.
I don't mind. We're friends. I'll post them in a bit. They don't have choruses though. They almost seam ike more, short songs than anything. |
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