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Krupp
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 Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:33 pm Post subject: Keep it Cool |
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Story is as follows in all of its simplicity:
A bunch of young college musicians form a band, and the rest is history; they try to achieve musical perfection, they hit a lot of problems, etc. Not an action-paced book or a thriller. More contemporary than anything else.
And by the way, if I post the attachment the wrong way, inform me. I don't want to be a dumb posting noob that don't know what he's doing... |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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Hey there
I did download this... and I'm working through it :p (I usually give a lot of detail on advanced critiques). This is my way of saying if I take too long, you have permission to spam me with pm's until I get it done. |
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Krupp
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Country: Where US elections and election enthusiasts won't bother me...
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| Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:45 pm Post subject: |
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| You probably shouldn't bother...I've dropped the piece and I'm not quite sure what I'm writing right now... |
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| Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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WHY DID YOU DROP IT ?? I critiqued it anyway, because it is a nice foundation for a story ! continue it, seriously  |
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