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Krupp
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:33 pm Post subject: Keep it Cool

Story is as follows in all of its simplicity: A bunch of young college musicians form a band, and the rest is history; they try to achieve musical perfection, they hit a lot of problems, etc. Not an action-paced book or a thriller. More contemporary than anything else. And by the way, if I post the attachment the wrong way, inform me. I don't want to be a dumb posting noob that don't know what he's doing...
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 1:34 pm Post subject:

Hey there I did download this... and I'm working through it :p (I usually give a lot of detail on advanced critiques). This is my way of saying if I take too long, you have permission to spam me with pm's until I get it done.

Krupp
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:45 pm Post subject:

You probably shouldn't bother...I've dropped the piece and I'm not quite sure what I'm writing right now...
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Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 7:56 pm Post subject:

WHY DID YOU DROP IT ?? I critiqued it anyway, because it is a nice foundation for a story ! continue it, seriously
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