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 Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:17 am Post subject: Readers Crit |
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Alright, so I'm not good at the grammer crits. I can normally do those if I have color changers and I haven't figured out the picture things yets.
SO!! I'm offering readers crits, basiclly what they are is where I'll read it and tell you if it is good, what a reader would want and so on. A big thing for me is to be able to picture the story in my head. It takes a lot to be able to do that, but it is possible. SO if you would like me to crit yours then please leave me the url to it here!! I'm better at Romance, but I can do anything. Well except poetry, I'm not really that good at those. Infact I'm no good at them.  |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:30 am Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27261.html
This is a romance that I think you'll like
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:09 am Post subject: |
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THis is mostly just for me to know what I have done and haven't.
Choc- yours are done. I did your first cause they were sorter and my brain didn't want to read a lot of text at the moment.
BBB- Yours is done.
Prok- I will get to yours soon, don't worry. If I dont give me a simple nudge. |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 8:15 pm Post subject: hey |
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Perfect! I've been needing a crit on my new story, but haven't gotten very many.
Here it is:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27723.html |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 5:41 am Post subject: |
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In my portfolio, 'Alphess: part one' and 'NN -- Prologue: Dark water, Pale flame' need your love! 
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| Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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Mandy--- I can't read yours right now it is WAY to long (i have a headache). If I don't get it then remind me.
OverEasy- Yours are done. Good job
Wolf--- I'll have to get to yours later too. Remind me if I don't. They look good, mostly because they are about wolves, I need to learn more about them for the story I am writing so your stories might help. |
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If you have time, I'd love a review on this. It looks long, but it's really just a lot of short paragraphs, so...
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html
If you want a review, please let me know! I want another star. 
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 11:13 pm Post subject: Need your crits! |
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| I need you to crit everything in my portfolio. |
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| Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 6:09 am Post subject: |
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Hey, I got a piece in Other called Intuition that could use a crit. It's in 5 parts, and it's "finished," so feel free to take a look!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29344.html
Thanks! PM me if you need something,
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