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yoha_ahoy
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 Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:01 pm Post subject: Yoyo's Crit Requests |
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I am now taking requests for critiques! 
What I Will Crit: * denotes what I'm best at.
*Poetry - all genres
Fiction - I prefer short stories. I don't always have time to get to stories with many chapters. But for longer stories, I may edit them in MS Word and post the critique as an attachment.
Action/Adventure
Fantasy
*Historical (I specialize in 1700-1900 eras.)
*Romance
Sci-Fi
Other
Non-Fiction - I can do grammar/spelling and organization on non-fic.
*Art & Photography - Beware, I will rip it to shreds! I'm an Art Major, so add a note if you don't want to become bacon bits. 
What I Will NOT Crit: - a.k.a I'm so bad at critting this thing you would bash me into oblivion because I was so unhelpful. Heh... heh... ^^;
Fanfiction
Novels
Scripts
Bring 'em on!!  *ahem*
And for those of you who demand a crit in return, I'll try to update this with my latest writing endeavor that needs a little tough loving. 
For now: Circus Pirates Part 9 You can find Part 1 at the link at the top of the page. ^^ Thanks! |
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JFW1415
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| Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 2:13 am Post subject: |
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Congrats on the job! (Becoming an Instructor.) Now, to make you regret you ever got it...heehee.
Feel free to ask for a review in exchange! I'm trying to get another star, hence the link in my siggy. ;P
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post346536.html#346536
Thanks!
~JFW1415 |
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OverEasy
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| Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 2:16 am Post subject: |
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Hey Yoyo Dear!
I've got a poem for you 
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28892.html
Much Love
Oye |
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yoha_ahoy
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JFW1415
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:02 am Post subject: |
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Hello! You asked to know when part two of He's Just Human came out, and I just posted it here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28953.html
It's not as good, so I need all the critiques I can get.
If you'd like a critique, just ask. I'm trying to get another star.
~JFW1415 |
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yoha_ahoy
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| Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 12:39 am Post subject: |
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| *pokes this* I'm still open for reviews!!! |
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OverEasy
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| Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 12:52 am Post subject: |
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Hello dear!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29935.html
Please and Thank You! |
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yoha_ahoy
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| Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 2:00 am Post subject: |
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| Oye, dear... I already critiqued that for you. |
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Azila
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 2:17 pm Post subject: |
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If you wouldn't mind:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30168.html
It's Other Fiction, and hasn't gotten many crits yet.
Thanks so much!
~Azila~ |
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 11:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Hello. I am having a little trouble with one of my stories. It is Encantado First Person Parts 1 and 2 in the Other Fiction forum. Be warned, when both parts are put together it is around 5,000 words, so it may be a little long. Any help that you could give me would be greatly appreciated. Thanks. |
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yoha_ahoy
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 2:17 am Post subject: |
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Azila and Eimear, yours are done. Conrad, yours are going to take a little bit longer, if you don't mind.
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Azila
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| Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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Hi, yoyo!
You asked that I tell you when part two is up ... and well now it is!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post370964.html#370964
I'm still not completely sure where this piece is going, and I half love it half hate it, so I'm looking for opinions.
Thanks!
~Azila~ |
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| Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 2:39 am Post subject: |
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I'm back for more dear.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30494.html
Please and Thank You! |
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