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EveryWayward Chapters 1 - 5.3
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 7:12 pm    Post subject: EveryWayward Chapters 1 - 5.3 Reply with quote

By popular request, this is the entire first 5.3 chapters of novel. I haven't had chance to rewrite chapters 1 and 3 yet, but I will do! Thanks!

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I have noticed this has been downloaded 6 or so times, so if you have, please just tell me what you thought! I know 1 - 3 were mind-numbingly painful, but please just let me know of your thoughts!

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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 3:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good! Keep writing!

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