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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:55 pm    Post subject: Pep For Poets Reply with quote
Get your poetry critiques here! The next couple of weeks are a great time to ask because I'm off uni for easter. But of course, after that I will certainly still make time to answer every request I receive. So post your poetry links here and I'll give you my finest crits. Smile

I also offer spelling and grammar checks for all works, so if spelling or sentence structure is your weakness, PM me your word document and I'll edit it and get it back to you ASAP.

Also, if I'm particularly helpful, feel free to mention my review in the reviewer testimonials thread.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hiya, Matt!

Could you take a look at this for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28349.html

I can raid your portfolio in return if you want. Smile

Thanks!

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Does poetry also mean lyrics? I'm looking for some critiques on a song I wrote. If you can't do lyrics, that's fine, but I'd really like it if you could take a look.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28448.html

Thanks heaps.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I critiqued both of your works.

More requests please!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Here's a few more Smile

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27805.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic25764.html

Please and Thank You!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey there, Matt

I'm participating in the NaPoWriMo and I was wondering if you could take a look at my NaPo thread (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28173.html). You don't have to give very in depth or specific critques, but a few broad general impressions for improvement would be greatly appreciated.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 10:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Done!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 10:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hello! Back with another Smile

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28892.html

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Done!

Anymore for any more?

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Oh! Me! Me! Let's see if I can get the link-thingie right...

I Am Legend

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Note: this has absolutely nothing to do with the movie.

Crit appreciated! Anything I put up on here generally gets ignored, so...

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'd love one on this if you get a chance;

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic23799.html
If you don't, don't worry. I'm happy to critique poetry in return so feel free to pm me or post in my thread here.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33351.html


everyone seems to be avoiding it, so If you want you can look at it! Thanks.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 5:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post398973.html#398973

Just posted this. I'm not that great at poetry and need all the help I can get. XD

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hello Very Happy


If you please

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33396.html

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 7:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
hii there.
I would really like some more critiques on the poems I wrote....especially the second one.
Please have a look and tell me how it is. Here are the links.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34563.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34610.html

thanks a lot in advance...I would really appreciate the help
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