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Give me something to read!

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:36 pm    Post subject: Give me something to read! Reply with quote
Hi!

So, I'm posting in this forum because (obviously) I'm willing to critique ^_^ I prefer poetry and short fiction, but I'm not completely averse to looking at something longer.

And that's about it, I suppose. Just leave a link and I'll do my best to get back to you asap.

-Leja

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
This thread is rather bare, so could you critique this? Thanks!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28301.html

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 12:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'll get right to this before the weekend's out! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I very rarely beg but... if you have the time?

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
(Of course I have time! Very Happy)

Done!


*eep* I'm sorry it took so long! I missed the updates in this forum after I got back from vacation!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Here you are dear

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29341.html


Please and Thank You!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 6:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, I got a 5 part story in Other that I'd like to get looked at. If you can get around to it!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29344.html

Thanks! It's called Intuition. Please bear in mind that it's meant to be read in one go. (That's assuming you're actually bothered:D)
Let me know if I can return the favor!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 7:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Okay; I'll try to get to it before the weekend's out; when I have time to sit and read it all at once! ^_^

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30917.html

Please? A very old piece I plan on re-writing and extending...
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, Leja! I adore your stuff, so could you take a look at this and help me out? Thank you muchly. ^_^

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This is a partial novel i'm working on. It's 16 pgs, but I'll give you 50 pts to do it.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Can you reviw my new poem? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32751.html

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