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Azila
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 Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:27 pm Post subject: Critiques! |
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Hello, all!
If you want a crit, tell me so here! Just make sure to post the link, so I can find it.
Some things about my reviews:
1. I like to review Other Fiction, Fantasy Fiction (<--most of the time) Historical Fiction and Non-fiction.
2. I can be made to critique poetry (if you give me cookies) but I don't know how helpful the review would be because I don't really know much about poetry.
3. I'm only 13--please don't give me anything rated R.
4. I don't want to critique "chapter 47, part 2 out of 7." 
5. Here are a few examples of my critiques: Crocodile Teeth, The Deadlne.
Thanks!
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:45 pm Post subject: |
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This is rated PG-13.
It's an series of stories, but they stand apart alone mainly, so you don't need to read the others to understand what is going on. It is also in 'Fantasy Fiction'
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27666.html |
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:39 am Post subject: |
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I only need less than twenty more crits in order to get another star!
...so, who wants a review? They're free.
~Azila~ |
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:56 pm Post subject: |
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So sorry, but I've gotten to the point where I depend upon you for reviews! DX! So here's chapter one of "Yarn". You so graciously reviewed the prologue, and it'd help a ton for a review on this one! Please? THANKYOU!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28937.html |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:13 am Post subject: |
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Hey, I'd appreciate a critique of my story:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28798.html
Could you also tell a couple of other people about it maybe? I haven't gotten any critiques yet! Thanks! |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:23 am Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html
There are three parts, and it's due soon. Can you look at them quickly/relook at them? (I can't remember if you read it before I edited...)
Thanks!
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| Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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Hello!
I thought I would ask something in return...? It's in the romance section, hope that is alright? I don't neccessarily need a critique on the first part, but the others are neglected of love, but you would have to read the first part to understand the other parts. @_@ So I will just link you to the first part.
God Still Loves You (1)
I will say that I have part three rated as R but only for some adult language so if you don't feel comfortable with that, I understand, and you don't have to look at it at all. ^_^
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| Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:40 pm Post subject: |
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Hi! You and your reviews are so awesome-possum! ^_^ If you could maybe...?
The Dragon, the dog, and the Dove.
It's classified in Action/Adventure, but I debated whether to put it in Other anyway. Hopefully it's alright. ^^ If you don't think you can help, though, don't worry about it. 
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| Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:43 am Post subject: |
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Hey! I would really love feedback on "Intuition" if you get a chance. It's a story separated into five sections... If you do look at it, bear in mind that it's meant to be read in one go. Thanks!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29344.html
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| Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:44 am Post subject: |
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| Oh, I should also mention, that though it isn't rated on there it IS somewhat freaky... maybe PG-13 if you're being conservative. So, if you don't want to look at it, totally understandable. |
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