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It Brings me to Tears
It Brings me to Tears

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah thats what i meant woops hehe sorry...

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wanted to make a suggestion.

Before you post, it is really helpful if you post your characters name. Most people are donig this, but Ghostwriter, your posts are slightly confusing in that aspect. (If that makes any sense).

Just a suggestion. *shrug*

Also, for those of you who didn't notice, I am trying to get most, if not all, of the female pirates into the cabin boys quarters. It makes sense to me that they'd be more comfortable sleeping in a different room than the guys, especially after they're found out. Heck, perhaps they'll figure each other out first? (just throwing more ideas out there).
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I Would, but I'm a non comformist.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with Bella. People posting their characters name before their actual post would help a lot. I've gone as far as adding Arthur Hearthorn's status on the ship, as well as a date with my posts.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And it's not technically conforming, so much as being thoughtful of hte people you are writing with. It's not as if we're asking you to change your writing style or anything.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

...I was joking.
If it makes you so uneasy, I will do it.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have just determined the worst thing about the internet is that you can't hear the other peoples voice and you never know when they're serious *glares*

Lol sorry if I sounded super-ticked then Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pirate song... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AM1NUGlo2ww

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ahaha...most of the time my post starts with the name of my character, but it's part of the story...is that okay? lol.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So everything said so far I agree with. Razz

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

posting your name before your post helps a lot, and it's really easy... so please do. or else. hehe.


oh btw lunabuna, that's an.... interesting pirate song. catchy.lol.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ahaha nice song, Luna, mate. heh. Wow. Very Happy Now it'll be stuck in my head all day long...>.< lol

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe sing along time!

I'm a pirate, that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

Yo ho, My friends I have a tale,
Of treasure. plunder, sea and sail,
Me story's bigger than a whale,
It gets so deep you'll have to bail.

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

I like to fish,
I like to fight,
I like to stay up half the night,
When I say starbird ye go right,
Me ma she say, 'Ye look afright'

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

I got no hand but that's me hook,
My blue tease in this chest I took,
I plunder stuff but I'm no crook,
They'll write about me in a book!

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

That's all there is to this here song,
I hope it didn't last to long,
A pirate's life might just be wrong,
So grow up nice, be big an' strong!

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

That's a peg below me knee!!!

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol, niice Luna. It is quite catchy *is bobbing head back and forth while listening and posting*

So, as I said in the SB, I might not post much this week. And I have no idea what to dio with Tristan/Isabella.

Erm...there was something else I watned to say, but i convientently forgot it...

Oh yeah! I was thinking, just as a random idea, we could bring Toribrio(?) with us, perhaps? Just a thought...

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that would be interesting, and would probably work since Toribrio would mostly be protective of the maps because they are a family heirloom. If she was interested in the treasure, she would have gone after it already. So she might want to come along just to make sure they are safe and also maybe because she wonders if it's real.

As for what to do with Tristan/Isabella I don't have any ideas Sad sorry. But I do have a question, since Toribrio is going to be a character that everyone can freely use, what should she be like? Any ideas, please share...

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