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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:17 am    Post subject: Readers Crit Reply with quote
Alright, so I'm not good at the grammer crits. I can normally do those if I have color changers and I haven't figured out the picture things yets.

SO!! I'm offering readers crits, basiclly what they are is where I'll read it and tell you if it is good, what a reader would want and so on. A big thing for me is to be able to picture the story in my head. It takes a lot to be able to do that, but it is possible. SO if you would like me to crit yours then please leave me the url to it here!! I'm better at Romance, but I can do anything. Well except poetry, I'm not really that good at those. Infact I'm no good at them. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'll bite.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27568.html

If you want me to critique anything of yours, send me a PM. Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
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This is a romance that I think you'll like

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'd love any crit's I can get on my new novel,

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27154.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27483.html

Thanks heaps.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
THis is mostly just for me to know what I have done and haven't.

Choc- yours are done. I did your first cause they were sorter and my brain didn't want to read a lot of text at the moment.

BBB- Yours is done.

Prok- I will get to yours soon, don't worry. If I dont give me a simple nudge. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 8:15 pm    Post subject: hey Reply with quote
Perfect! I've been needing a crit on my new story, but haven't gotten very many.

Here it is:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27723.html

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Here is the first and second chapters to my new Romance story. It's not really what I normally do, so bare with me.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27574.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27616.html

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 5:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
In my portfolio, 'Alphess: part one' and 'NN -- Prologue: Dark water, Pale flame' need your love! Smile

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Mandy--- I can't read yours right now it is WAY to long (i have a headache). If I don't get it then remind me.

OverEasy- Yours are done. Good job

Wolf--- I'll have to get to yours later too. Remind me if I don't. Very Happy They look good, mostly because they are about wolves, I need to learn more about them for the story I am writing so your stories might help. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 3:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Here's an Werewolf story that you can crit............................

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27531.html

thank u..........................

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you have time, I'd love a review on this. It looks long, but it's really just a lot of short paragraphs, so...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

If you want a review, please let me know! I want another star. Wink

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 11:13 pm    Post subject: Need your crits! Reply with quote
I need you to crit everything in my portfolio.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 1:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, if you want me to crit you work bump me. If I haven't done yours and you asked tell me if you still want me to do it.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 6:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, I got a piece in Other called Intuition that could use a crit. It's in 5 parts, and it's "finished," so feel free to take a look!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29344.html

Thanks! PM me if you need something,
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