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This thread was created on December 29, 2007
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Talking_Pinata
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Couple roughs spots. I swear I tried not to let my emotion get away. But the ending was AMAZING! I think I've found Cabbage in a Tom! XD Sorry.
Anyways. Terrific. Beautiful. The ending got me. First story I've REALLY read on this website ever! Thankyou. |
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Memento Mori
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Cute story.
There seems to be a ton of good stories about imaginary friends that are sad at the same time cute.
I liked this one too!!
You captured the essence of an imaginary friend perfectly.
I just wonder, if I told you guys I have an imaginary friend, would you believe me?
Yours truly,
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Stella Thomas
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| Of course I would. Do you???? |
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