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Beyond the Heart
Beyond the Heart

by crazy_lil_blondie in Romantic Fiction
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sound interesting. As a slowing down affect to it, it makes me wonder what it might be about. I'd probably read the blurb to get a closer look.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds like a very hopeful story, maybe a little sad, with a very beautiful message to it.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 3:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dream King huh? I would definetly buy it,assuming that the opening paragraph was good and all that stuff. Love the tittle. I think the only thing that would stop me from buying the book is if it was romance.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 6:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds pretty interesting, I would assume it is either a tale of the troubles of real life or some sort of fantasy novel.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 6:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry, but anything with the word "Shards" immediately puts me on guard. A sort of emo book about somebody breaking the mirror of time, and rearranging the pieces quite clumsily to cause such occurrences as mobiuses, (is that the plural?), your grandfather is your son, et cetera. The heroes try to contact the person through the broken time to repair it...
I would check the blurbs if the cover art was interesting.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 4:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Something about overcoming a tragedy that occurs within a city? Might be terroristic or a natural disaster. I'd flip through it.


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 5:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds a bit cliche, but if it looked any good I would pick it up, scan over it and yes, I may buy it. Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm guessing that this is between two worlds. Maybe about a girl who hears a voice calling her to a spot at dusk. If the cover art was good and the blurbs were interesting and well writen enough, I would buy it.

EDIT: Ooops. Forgot the tittle.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm guessing its about a battle between two worlds? Sounds interesting, though maybe a lil bit cliche

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 4:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seems like it would be similar to The Wizard of Oz. Some kind of adventure to a crystal city. I'd give it a try.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice with the alliteration. Gives a ring to it. Probably a science fiction novel about a person who can manipulate atoms, either through powers or technology. Not a big sci-fi fan, but I might give it spin.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 10:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In a way it sounds like its one of those stories that's typical. If the cover art is good, then I might read it. If the cover art isn't good, then I'll read the back, If it doesn't look boring i'd give it a try.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds interesting. I would look at the blurb, but if it was jsut some guy's diary I would run away. If not, I owuld give it a thought.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Makes me think of Historical things, like wars and horses and sword battles. Not really my thing. Either that or something like father/son going to war, or something like that. I probably wouldn't read it personally.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Either horror or melodramatic chick lit. I'd be interested.


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