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 Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:57 pm Post subject: Best beginning |
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Write me a beginning! Basically, you must write me an introduction to a story, up to 2000 words, no more. Just go crazy! No rules aside from that, just that the best one wins.
Prizes - Same old...
1) 3 decent crits on 3 pieces + 200 points
2) 2 " " " 2 " + 100 points
3) 1 " " " 1 " + 50 points
Post the link to it in this forum, maximum of 2 entries.
EDIT: The deadline has been extended. |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Can it be the intro you're already written? |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:08 pm Post subject: |
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| Sure why not?! DoaV? If so, the competition will be hard for the others, hehe! |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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I'd like to try this. No guarantees, but I think I'll enter.
Is there a minimum word limit?
Oh, and when is the deadline?
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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No min, no max (within limits) word count.
It'd be great if you could enter, the ending is (haha!...) on the 31st. |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:07 pm Post subject: |
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Ooh, the 31st? That's kind of soon. 
I will try.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:11 pm Post subject: |
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*raises hand and jumps up and down* Oh! me! me! I have a question!
Can we enter more than one beginning? Cause as much as I love DoaV I am tempted to write another intro just to see if it's any good. *loves drama* 
Oh! Also, do we post a link, or do we post the beginning here? |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:13 pm Post subject: |
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I will update the original post... lol.
Azila > If you would liek an extenstion let me know and I will change the date. |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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| *le gasp* Wait! o.O No fair. This might well be the first contest I enter...and the prize is something I'll get anyways! Do we get to pick which works you critique? XD |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:27 pm Post subject: |
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| Yes, tell me wich ones! |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 12:47 am Post subject: |
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| Hmm... I might enter. The problem is, when I say that, I usually don't. So, just a beginning. What are we judged on? If I know I can think of what I should enter. |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 2:32 am Post subject: |
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Count the Gahkmeister in!
Q: How many entries are we allowed? |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 1:03 pm Post subject: |
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This is my beginning to my short story triliogy... hopefully.
Pianissimo
You've already read this, so it should be easy to judge.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:55 pm Post subject: |
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Oh goodie! More entrants! Watch out people, Pianissimo is goooood!
What will I be looking for? :-
Does it capture my interest, would I want to read on?
Is it original?
How is the grammar?
Does it flow well?
Those are the basics... |
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