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 Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:58 am Post subject: |
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Emily (that's right, I'm going to use my real name!) walks in and immediately starts dancing to Blue Oyster Cult. She heads towards Tassen.
"Nice song choice, Tassen!" she says emphatically over the music. "Now if you'll excuse me while I grab myself a Dr. Pepper"
She walks towards the bar and spots Onceuponatim3xo. "Mind if I join you?" she inquires, pulling up a stool regardless. |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 2:40 am Post subject: |
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| Onceuponatim3xo sips her hot chocolate and chats with omgafilangi (Emily). They discuss how popular their name is and while they are doing so someone shouts "Emily!" and both turn to look, the person that called the name says to Onceuponatim3xo "not you, the other one" |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 4:21 am Post subject: |
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| Emily turns to the other Emily(Onceuponatim3xo) and smiles apologetically. "It happens all the time to me too, this is the first time it's been for me in awhile!" Emily calls back to the person "I'll get back to you in a minute or so" and she and Emily discuss literature and the Beatles and New York City for three and a half hours. The person never comes back. "It figures" says Emily (omgafilangi). |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 11:23 pm Post subject: |
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| adna saunters in, trying to look all casual, then, when nobody's looking breaks into a crazy dance and then jumps up and down and shouts "It's back!" Everyone stares over at her. adna checks her notes. “Oh, it seems it's been up and running again for a while." She grins sheepishly, then straightens up and stumbles over to the bar. "I'll have hot chocolate with a dollop of strawberry ice cream in it," she slurs. While her drink is being made, she quietly changes the music to the Beatles, sits back down, and starts singing the wrong words at the top of her voice. She turns to Emily and shouts over the music, “I love rum!” |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:35 am Post subject: |
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| "I can't tell..." Emily shouts back, a bit put off by adna's behavior, but entirely enthusiastic about the Beatles, her all time favorite band of ever in the history of life, being put on the juke. She sits at the bar for awhile, not really noticing that anyone's around her anymore, just letting the Beatles take her down to strawberry fields, when suddenly she feels a tap on the shoulder. |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Aedomir stumbled in. "I need a drink..." |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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Adnamarine gestures for Aedomir to come sit by her.
"Try the coffee. It's great... good for hangovers." She slumps down onto the counter. Sits up and slaps the counter, "Yo bartender, drinks for all my friends! Sorry Aedomir, but you're not my friend." Aedomir pokes Adna.
"I'm kidding! I'm kidding. What would you like?" |
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| "Oh thanks, I'll have a... Whiskey, I think..." Aedomir hit his head against the counter and groaned. |
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| "I don't think they offer that here... unfortunately." Glares at the bartender. "Hard luck deary. Want something else?" |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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*pokes Aedomir*
"Hey! How've you been?"
*looks over at bartender-whoever that is*
"May I have a rootbeer float? Minus the rootbeer. Ha ha! Just kidding." |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 11:47 pm Post subject: |
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Firearris sits on a stool and drinks her drink.
"Hi Adna!" She says |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 12:53 am Post subject: |
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*Commando enters the bar, screaming at the top of his lungs*
Oh, my God! I'v been stabbed, I need the power of healing Dr Pepper to make me all betteeer!!!! |
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| Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 1:24 am Post subject: |
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Bella walks in, not knowing for certain what is going on, and immediatly finds a seat on top of a table that is unnocupied.
Sitting crosslegged, she silently sips a gin tonic. |
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| Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 1:50 am Post subject: |
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Tassen waits until the song is over, then changes it again (Rasputin by Boney M).
He returns to the bar and sits there, staring into space, an odd expression resembling a mix of boredom, terror, anger, sadness, and apathy on his face.
(Tassen had a bad day.) |
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| Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 2:53 am Post subject: |
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*sob*
no one's here....... |
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