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PerforatedxHearts
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 Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 2:26 am Post subject: The Kids Want CALAMITY! |
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Whoo! So I finally got caught up on [some] of my typing. But here's what "TKWC!" is about.
Aja Price is a girl who meets the nine Muses during her freshman year in high school. Unfortunately, she just has to pick the one who seems to hate her the most to fall in love with. It's a sharp contrast, his bitterness and anger with her shy and introverted personality. So what will she pick? Her calamity-filled past or her not-so-clear future?
Feel free to make grammatical corrections, but otherwise edit it in red, please.
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| Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 11:02 pm Post subject: |
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yayyy, so I proofread it or whatever! and I must say that I really like it, and I want MORE. =D
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 1:05 pm Post subject: |
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Hello!
Nice going so far.
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:41 am Post subject: |
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| *glee* Post more. Now. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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A delightful story, love! No major complaints from me, mostly grammatical stuff. ^_^
I'm glad you asked me to critique this! It was highly enjoyable. Plus, I love the title.
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