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PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:38 pm    Post subject: Lord of the Rings: Beauty's Heart Reply with quote

Hiya! I just thought this would be a fun storybook.

It is a LotR spinoff, well almost. Basically, you are either a Gondor or Rohan soldier/citizen. It follows the events of LotR, Helm's Deep and that. In Gonder, there would be Osigiliath and that. In Rohan, you would have Helm's Deep etc. You cannot be any of the people mentioned in the book or film, or interact with them.

That is not the main storyline though. The idea, is that you can just go nuts in the cities and battles or whatever. Have a load of kids, get married, fall in love, kill some people. I will let you know when we have reached a certain point. IE, Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli and Gandalf arrive and they go to Helm's Deep etc. Other than that, go mad! We will assume that everyone in Gondor will know each other, as will all those in Rohan. You get the idea.

Gondorians live in Minas Tirith, but can become a ranger in Ithilian, go to Osigiliath etc

Rohirrim live in Edoras, but can become rider scouts.

Rules:

No God modding
No killing other's characters
No interaction with heroes, although you can turn into one Wink

Races:

Elf
Dwarf
Human

Characters:
Please use this format:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Race:
Description:
Personality:
Background:
Weapons:
Class:
Country:

You can have up to two, here is mine:

Name: Aedomir
Gender: Male
Age: 39
Race: Human
Description: Warm blue eyes, messy brown hair, pale skin, tall, muscley.
Personality: Friendly
Background: Soldier
Weapons: Bow, spear, chainmail armour, sword, arrows
Class: Rider of Rohan
Country: Rohan

Current Characters -This is instead of a DT

Caedwyn

He is a male 23 year-old human. He is a ranger but no one knows where comes from.

Silvin

He is a male 23 year-old human residing in Gondor and is an Ithilian ranger. He carries a long silver bow and a knight sword. His father died defending Osigiliath.

Aedomir

He is a male 39 year-old human residing as a rider scout in Rohan. He has a bow, spear, chainmail armour, and arrows.

Kayla

She is a 2200 year-old elf residing in Rivendall. She only has a dagger.

Isinaar

He is a 30 year-old male human ranger residing in Rivendal and the Shire. He carries a longsword and bow.

Coraline

She is a 29 year-old human with Amnesia. She has a bow and arrow.

Isabella

She is a female 25 year-old human residing in Rohan. She is a rider and grew up with the elves. She has a bow and arrow, double swords, throwing knives, and poison.

Brian

He is a 30 year-old human and is Isabella's sister. He is a rider with same weapons. ^

Karana

She is a female (obvious, eh?) elf who looks 21. She is a ranger with a recurve bow and a scimitar. She is scout working Gondor ranger Faramir (you didn't say, I imagin you meant Rivendall, but this works better sorry! Tell me if you want me to change it.).

Brenda

She is a 27 year-old human in Rohan. She lived in Lothlorien for a long while then left at age. She is a lone ranger with a bow and arows and a sword.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Silvin

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Race: Human

Description: http://genemir.deviantart.com/art/Green-Archer-31142372 (No pointy ears) Dark brown hair, Brown and green cloak, dark blue eyes.

Personality: Quiet and distant. He takes orders well, but can also give them.

Background: His father was a soldier of Gondor, but died defending Osigiliath. He just recently joined the Gondor army.

Weapons: Long silver bow, knight sword.

Class: Ithilian Ranger

Country: Gondor

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good good! More people please!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Kayla
Gender: Female
Age: 2200
Race: Elf
Description: http://www.eso-garden.com/images/uploads_bilder/dlabraddath_1.jpg (without the wings)
Personality: mysterious, doesn't really know herself that well, but she's caring, loving, and feels alone all the time.
Background: she was raised in Rivendell, stayed there her whole live.
Weapons: Only a dagger on her calf that she never uses for anything but cutting stuff she needs
Class: one of the few remaining Elves
Country: Rivendell for the time being.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Isinaar
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Race: Human
Description: http://neldor.deviantart.com/art/Drinking-Dunadan-64535694
Personality: Mysterious and quiet, but helpful when required and friendly in his own way.
Background: Grew up with his father in the North, visits Rivendell and Bree from time to time.
Weapons: Longsword and bow
Class: Ranger of the North
Country: Rivendell/the Shire

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Keep them coming people!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Coraline
Gender: Female
Age: 29
Race: Human
Description: http://alpha.cbs.com/primetime/moonlight/images/gallery/fullsize/shannyn_sossamon2.jpg

Personality: Sly, often sarcastic, cunning, smart
Background: she has amnesia and is currently just wandering around Rohan
Weapons: Bow and arrow
Class: (???)
Country:Rohan

can I call Aedomir..is he up for love????

*Also I know nothing about the LoTR..so I apologize*

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure why not lol, don't worry.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sooo I changed my characters history.since I didn't know what to put for her history I gave her amnesia..now she is just wandering around Rohan trying to figure out who she is..When can we start?????

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good idea! I think we will start tomorrow, when I get back frm school. Then there migh tbe a few more members. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I had an idea. Even though this is based on LOTR, maybe we could change it just a bit. Almost none of us are near each other so we can't really react. We could change the story a bit so we all end up at Helms Deep and so on. What do you think?)

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I will post a character tomorrow! XD)

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I like Tony's idea, I was just gonna have my character get lonely and try to go find someone)

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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(I had an idea. Even though this is based on LOTR, maybe we could change it just a bit. Almost none of us are near each other so we can't really react. We could change the story a bit so we all end up at Helms Deep and so on. What do you think?)


Good idea! I thought, since in the book, rangers come frm the north, Gonder could come and save Helm's Deep. Then they all ride out to Minas Tirith. How does that sound?

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good to me.

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