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Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream

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(Can someone bring me in please??)

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 10:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bella--

As I ran out of the school, hoping to find Remus somewhere near by, I ran into someone else.

"I'm sorry," I said, trying to get past him. He grabbed my arm to stop me.

"What's wrong?" he asked, noticing the way I was rushing. He inhaled then stared at me for a moment. "Someone's bleeding," he noted.

"Wait...you're a vampire too?" I said quietly, not wanting anyone else to hear (not taht anyone was around.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Thank you!!!)

~Tyler~

Tyler nodded. He couldn't believe he'd met another vampire already. "Are you okay?" Tyler asked the female vampire.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Keira

I left my maths classroom and walked casually down to English where I had my next lesson. On the way, I passed many students, most with pets wrapped around their necks or padding along behind them. Schools that allowed animals were rare so most students didn't like to miss out on the liberty of having an animal with them.

I wasn't too bothered and the pet I wanted - a white rhinocerous - wasn't the most suitable for such a small building.

"Hey Keira!" I turned at the door to my English class to find out who was calling my name.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 1:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bella--

"Yes, I'm fine. One of my really good friends got cut though..." I breathed deeply, taking in the scent of the outdoors.

"Really good friends?"

"Yes...I've known him for as long as I can remember. He smells amazing...and when he's bleeding it gets 'worse'." I explained.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 2:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Ah. Let me guess you're the vampire whom loves the human but must be cautious, so you don't kill him correct?" Tyler asked a smile on his face.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 2:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bella--

I nodded, hiding my eyes.

"He smells so...good. Better than any other human." I expalined.

**Sorry, this is really short*

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 2:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tyler~

Tyler let out a husky, yet smooth laugh. "I know how you feel. I had a friend like that...till I got hungry...oops that doesn't help does it? Sorry."

(sorry mine's short too.)

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Bella--

My eyes grew wide. Part of me was even more worried than before, while the other part felt bad for Tyler. I couldn't imagine killing the person I loved...just...no!

Bella, what happened? Remus was running toward us from a few miles down the path. Already, I could see him.

"Oh my God that's a wolf!" Tyler exclaimed, preparing to attack.

"Don't!" I shouted, jumping between he and Remus. "Remus is my bond!"

Remus, be careful. You know how vampires can be with wolves! I snapped inwardly, hoping he would stay a distance back. Instead, he came to sit by my side.

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Tyler~

"Your bond? Oh crap I for-" but before Tyler could finish what he was saying a huge tiger sized, fox ran up from behind him and lunged at him, knocking to the ground with a thud.

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Bella--

"Holy crap! You're worried about my wolf, and you have a fox the size of a tiger?!" I exclaimed, staring.

"Well, foxes aren't exactly in the same class with dogs," he replied. Remus snarled at the insult.

"Calm down," I said, running my fingers through his thick fur. "Remus is perfectly harmless," I assured Tyler. "He's very protective, however."

I could smell Ethan just as strongly as you could. Is he all right?

Yes, he's fine. Just a few scratches on his shoulder. I left before it got too bad. I just hope he doesn't come to find me... As if on cue, Ethan opened the door to the school and walked out.

"Oh crud..." I murmured.

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Tyler~

"Dax! Get off me you lug!" Tyler shouted as a kid walked out of the builing. Dax growled and stared at the newcomer.

'Human.' Dax told him.

'I know that! Now get off me!' Tyler yelled in his mind.

'No. This kid is bleeding.' Dax growled.

'Sheesh. He doesn't even smell appetizing enough to eat. Yuck.' Tyler still yelled as he wrinkled his nose at the stech. The kid smelled like flowers, no worse. Like roses.

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Bella--

Ethan's scent hit me like a rush of warm air. He smelled like roses...

"Ethan, please go," I said softly, while Remus made to block me from moving toward him.

"But...Bella...what's wrong?" he asked slowly.

"Ethan, I'll explain later, I promise." he gave a sad, almost impossible to ignore look.

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Tyler~

Dax stood up and sat in front of the girl, whose name was appearantly Bella. Tyler stood up and wiped his jeans off.

'Stay there. I'm not sure how long Bella can hold it.' Tyler said to Dax, half-amused.

'Kay.' Dax replied in a kiddish tone.

Dax began to pant and wag both his big, orange, bushy tails.

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Ariel-

I exited the school, preparing to find my brother and head home.

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I cursed and ran over. "Come on, Ethan, lets go."

Bella glanced at me thankfully. Ethan reluctantly allowed himself to be led away.

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