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Gwenevire
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 Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:03 am Post subject: In Its Eyes... |
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Okay, so we are going to write in a flies point of view. Nothing more nothing less...
It has to be around 400 to 700 words long.
Please have it in by March 7th I know its a long time but it will give you tuns of time to edit and perfect your story.
Terms
• Write it in 1st person
• Its about a fly
• Must be in by April 30th
• Don't say you can if you can't
You can either send me the link to your story or PM it to me. I will PM you with you placing and if you did not qualify in the top 4 then I will send you a message saying something like this:
Hello.
I am sorry, but you entry to "In Its Eyes..." did not make it in the top four.
Better luck next time.
Placing
• First Place: 5 reviews
• Second Place: 4 reviews
• Third Place: 3 reviews
• Fourth Place: 2 reviews
When I send you your placing and you have qualified you may send me your choices of stories you would like reviewed. Please follow the Placing chart.
Good luck and have fun!
Cheers,
Gwenevire
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| Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:42 pm Post subject: |
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I think I will have ago but...
March 7th...
That's when I've got my first science GCSEs... |
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| Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:28 am Post subject: |
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So your in? You can submit it earlier if you like XD
What's a GCSEs? |
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| Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:45 pm Post subject: |
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lol, ye Im in.
A gcse is the last compulsory exam in england schools. You need the best you can get to go to sixth form (college) then university.
I think I will have a go at wiritng this now, ive got a week off. |
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| Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 4:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Okay! Thank you And good luck! |
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| Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 4:51 pm Post subject: |
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lol
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| Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:45 pm Post subject: |
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| Interesting...... I'll think about it. |
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:21 am Post subject: |
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| Sure, take your time... You will have a tone of it :p |
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 5:06 am Post subject: |
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| I am in! I think! |
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 5:15 am Post subject: |
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| Cool, good luck |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:19 pm Post subject: |
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Just wondering, can in be metaphorical? Like not LITERALLY a fly, but someone who is (as the saying goes) "a fly on the wall"?
I will have to think about this.
I'll try to enter.
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:28 pm Post subject: |
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Unless they think like a fly, no.
Take your time
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| Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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| I started writing it, probs this weekend or late next week, I won't be late! |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:50 am Post subject: |
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| Does this mean we can pass it in on Friday? Or is Friday the day you stop accepting them? I'm hoping to get it in to you, but I'm not sure if I should even try if it can't go in on Friday. |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:45 pm Post subject: |
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Pass it in tomorrow (Friday) I will not be able to read them right away unless you post it later on tonight or early tomorrow. I will be gone until next Monday but I will read them and categorize them soon after that
Sorry for the inconvenience, I was unaware that I was going to be away this Friday.
NOTE: Just a reminder to all it is due tomorrow at the latest. Please PM me the link to your story or just simply post it here (I would prefer it in a PM) As soon as I am finished I will PM you everyone's placing and you will get your crits.
Good luck
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If you have it ready now you can post it
Its now official everyone who didn't place in the top four get one review! |
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