Stop The Scrolling Header | Enable the Scrolling Header

Young Writers Society
News:  

Must Read: No Chat-Speak

Happy Thanksgiving!
Username:    Password:      Log me on automatically each visit    
Beginning of a story
Beginning of a story

by savetheoceans in Romantic Fiction
Young Writers Society Forum Index -> Storybooks » Storybook Archives

This thread was created on February 5, 2008
Post new topic   Reply to topic
Digg It Del.icio.us


Danvers High Goto page 1, 2, 3 ... 9, 10, 11  Next

Topic ID: 25595
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
GingerLizzy   View This User's Portfolio
But The Tops Of Carrots Are Green
Master of the Forum

461
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 16
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1077
Reviews: 461
Country: England
300 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 9:48 am    Post subject: Danvers High Reply with quote

Okay, so this is my second Storybook, but my first fantasy Storybook, so excuse me if I'm a little waffy.

Rules & Stuff

- No limit to the amount of people
- A maximum of two characters per person
- Spelling and grammar is a big thing - obviously
- Try not to control other characters too much, but the teachers are okay for people to control
- Students can be aged 13 - 17

Races

You can be any of these races;

- Vampire
- Werewolf Scratch that; no wolves.
- Witch
- Sorcerer
- Necromancer
- Clairvoyant

Personality Guidelines

The vampires cannot bite anyone in the school; that's the school rules, but blood is available from the school nurse. There are not many younger vampires, so therefore there are not many vampires in the whole school.

Witches and Sorcerers do not get along very well, as the Sorcerers feel themselves superior to the Witches; you can have dark and light Witches, where the light are mainly protectors and healers, the dark with defensive spells.

Necromancers and Clairvoyants are quite and reserved and have a strange air about them. They rarely get into disputes if they canhelp it, but when they do, they cause a ruckus.

The Cabals are families of sorcerers whoarea little like the mafia, on a spellcasting level, although they tend to work for money only.

Okay, I'll give it a week or so before I start, rack up some profiles. Smile

--------------------

Name: Paige
Age: Seventeen
Race: Witch
Appearance: Eyes of different colour; one green and one blue. She has bright red hair with a blackstreak in the front and stands at around 5'10".
Personality: Being the daughter of a Cabal leader, she has the tendency to lose her temper a lot and likes to be alone. She's outcasted from the Cabal for being a witch.

_________________
Worship the ginger monkey Smile aaand join my new group!

Oh, and enter my new contest!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website MSN Messenger
*singerofthenight*   View This User's Portfolio
just stole your pickle! Wha hahaha *runs off*
Speaker of the Forum

52
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 16
Joined: 16 Jan 2008
Posts: 733
Reviews: 52
Country: I wish i knew...*blinks*
414 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 2:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i give it a try...

name: Satika
Age: fifteen
Race: witch
appearance: eyes are like that of a wolf, but changes...smetimes they are yellowish green, other times they are gray with sparks of yellow and green with a hint of purple. hair is shortt and spiked. dirty blonde with green tips. likes to wear black and green.
Personality: doesnt know where she came from. she doesnt know who her biological parents are. adoptive parents are Cabel. she has a twin sister named Seqyuoyah(not identical)the only thing different with her and her sister is their eyes. has little friends.

she is no longer single(has laid claim to Slade)



i think that ought to do it....what do you think?

_________________
Lifewas radical rightafterImetthe monster. Later,life becameharder,complicated. Ultamitely,aliving hell. Like swimmingagainst a riptide,walking thewrongdirection inthefastlaneofafreeway,wakingfrom tehsweetestdreamstofindyourselfinthemiddleofa nightmare.


Last edited by *singerofthenight* on Tue Feb 05, 2008 7:49 pm; edited 3 times in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger
Bella   View This User's Portfolio
KITTY!!! ^.^
Master of the Forum

132
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 15
Joined: 13 Feb 2007
Posts: 2483
Reviews: 132
Country: Wherever my stars may lead me - preferably Chicago - which isn't a country...
300 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 2:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This sounds pretty sweet!

Name: Bella
Age: 16
Race: Vampire/Sorceress
Appearance: http://dark-arya.deviantart.com/art/Vampiress-49895533 Bella likes to wear the old fashioned dresses and such, except for on the rare occasion that she goes out in public. She prefers not to attract that much attention in public. Her hair is dark, dark brown, with a few random colored streaks that she put in. Her eyes are violet.
Personality: Bella is extremely outgoing, but has a temper. When she gets very irritated, it takes everything she has not to just rip into that persons skin. She has been caught attempting to bite at least 3 different students, but has not been kicked out yet.
Other: Just grabbed Ariel's character ^-^

A few questions:

-Is it okay to have crosses, like I do here. If not just say so-
-Is there a set time period. Is it now, or is it set in the past? What about clothing?-
-Is there any certain thing we should know about the different Races, appearance wise? Are the vampires fangs visible, or sheathed until they feed? Do the vampires have wings? Are there certain marks that symbolize a wich? etc. etc.-
-What about sun? Does it effect vampires?-
-Also, just to be sure, you know that necromancy involves summoning the dead? (considering that this is a school and all)-

_________________
Got YWS? (pshyesss!)

I put my little brother into my NaNoWriMo just so my main character could kill him. <.<
>.>


Last edited by Bella on Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:05 pm; edited 2 times in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
Maybe   View This User's Portfolio
Maybe Not.
Master of the Forum

95
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 13
Joined: 10 Mar 2007
Posts: 2007
Reviews: 95
Country: Outer Space
350 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 2:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll join.

Name: Zak
Age: 15
Race: Necromancer
Gender: Male
Appearance: Short, spiky black hair with electric blue streaks and gray eyes flecked with the same electric blue. He has a slim, graceful build and his skin is slightly tanned. He has a small tatto on the back of his shoulder and a scar running down the left side of his face from eye to jaw.
Personality: Witty, secretive, mysterious, stubborn and independent. He doesn't mix well with others and usually keeps to himself. He hates crowds and loves reading and writing.
History: He doesn't like to talk about it or remember it. Too many bad memories.
Other: He has been claimed by Bella's character.

_________________
"It's funny, I thought with it being my plane and all that it would just wait for me to get there... I mean doesn't it kind of defeat the whole purpose of having your own plane if it departs before you arrive?"
Note: Gone from 11/23-11/30(ish).


Last edited by Maybe on Tue Feb 05, 2008 4:10 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
LunaBuna43   View This User's Portfolio
(oT..To)
Epic Novelist

63
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 13
Joined: 27 Jan 2008
Posts: 2555
Reviews: 63
Country: In Granola Bar Land, eating all the s'mores
300 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Can we make up our own race? Just no wolves??)

Name: Tamaru (Tama)

Age: Sixteen

Occupation: Tenth Grade, Swordsmanship Captain, and Softball, Basketball, Volleyball, and Tennis Captain...

Race: Zodiac Shifter (They are humans that can shift into their given animal shape. They have magical powers also. There are only two Zodiac Shifters of the same animal in every hundred years...the other animal zodiac shifter of the same animal is the others soul-mate.)

Appearance: http://amuria.deviantart.com/art/chinese-zodiac-dog-61322722

Dog Form: http://wildspiritwolf.deviantart.com/art/Lyanti-Wolf-Commission-60784867

She has two tattoo's the one on her lower back: http://wildspiritwolf.deviantart.com/art/Yin-Yang-Tribal-Wolf-Tattoo-70899868 (Every Zodiac Shifter has this tattoo with it's own animal inside.)

The one on her right arm: http://wildspiritwolf.deviantart.com/art/Cuddle-Wolves-Tattoo-Design-42015589 (This represents the Dog Zodiac's Soul mate.)

Personality: Sly, Calm, Tempermental, Humorous, and Fun-loving

Hobbies: Swordsmanship, All sports, Hiking, and getting into trouble.

_________________
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
My first puppers Pikapet
My second puppers Pikapet
Check out my new group! Roleplayers Unite!


Last edited by LunaBuna43 on Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:54 pm; edited 2 times in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger
Via   View This User's Portfolio
Ἀθηνᾶ
Epic Novelist

681
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 20
Joined: 05 Nov 2006
Posts: 3456
Reviews: 681
Country: second to the left and straight on 'til morning
266 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Seven

Age: Seventeen

Race: Witch (light mostly, dark on occasion)

Gender: Female

Appearance: Dark brown hair, big curls naturally. Crystal blue eyes, olive complexion. About 5'4", skinny but not sickly skinny.

Personality" She is sweet as could be, but she loves a little danger. She doesn't understand the concept behind the races not liking each other for no reason really, and doesn't act upon it. It never concerns her what race the people are she is talking to or she is friends with.

Very Happy

_________________
My Literary and Arts Blog

"I think I'd miss you even if we'd never met." -The Wedding Date
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
TNCowgirl   View This User's Portfolio
Princess of Storybooks and Queen of DTWH!!
Writer of Legend

99
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 17
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 5710
Reviews: 99
Country: USA
1720 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Storm

Age: 17

Race: (I'd rather make up another cause I don't know much about this race, but if not) Clairvoyant

Appearance: Eyes: http://lilfuzz6.deviantart.com/art/Eye-7699930 (These are his eyes, the eyeball, not anything around it. Very Happy
Face: http://orioto.deviantart.com/art/Shy-Guy-57563982
He is muscular, not body builder though. He is 6' and very tan.

Personality: He is calm, collective, and not very talkative. He tries to keep peace, but will jump in a fight if one of his friends are in danger. He is quiet, and sweet. (Up for fallin in love Very Happy )

We need more guys!


Name: Slade

Age: 17

Race: (This is the only thing different) Clairvoyant/vampire (he was bite by a fellow student, even though it was against the rules. He is only a year old in vampire, but has great control. Very Happy

Appearance: Eyes: http://nanasfreak.deviantart.com/art/Green-Eye-3-51263794 (These are his eyes, the eyeball, not anything around it. Very Happy
Face: http://orioto.deviantart.com/art/Shy-Guy-57563982
He is muscular, not body builder though. He is 6'2 and very tan.

Personality: Protective, and pretty much the same as his brother. THough he is more likely to get into a fight.

Other: He is Storm's twin, and is up for fallin in love too Razz

_________________
Christ Paris: A guy the world gave up on. The plane he was flying disappeared Nov. 1 of this year. A few days ago the searchers gave up the search. May he prove everyone wrong and still be alive.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???


Last edited by TNCowgirl on Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:52 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
Via   View This User's Portfolio
Ἀθηνᾶ
Epic Novelist

681
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 20
Joined: 05 Nov 2006
Posts: 3456
Reviews: 681
Country: second to the left and straight on 'til morning
266 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seven is claiming Storm, if you are okay with that TN Wink

_________________
My Literary and Arts Blog

"I think I'd miss you even if we'd never met." -The Wedding Date
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
TNCowgirl   View This User's Portfolio
Princess of Storybooks and Queen of DTWH!!
Writer of Legend

99
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 17
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 5710
Reviews: 99
Country: USA
1720 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is fine with me. Very Happy

_________________
Christ Paris: A guy the world gave up on. The plane he was flying disappeared Nov. 1 of this year. A few days ago the searchers gave up the search. May he prove everyone wrong and still be alive.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
Maybe   View This User's Portfolio
Maybe Not.
Master of the Forum

95
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 13
Joined: 10 Mar 2007
Posts: 2007
Reviews: 95
Country: Outer Space
350 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll make another character if we need more guys.

_________________
"It's funny, I thought with it being my plane and all that it would just wait for me to get there... I mean doesn't it kind of defeat the whole purpose of having your own plane if it departs before you arrive?"
Note: Gone from 11/23-11/30(ish).
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
*singerofthenight*   View This User's Portfolio
just stole your pickle! Wha hahaha *runs off*
Speaker of the Forum

52
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 16
Joined: 16 Jan 2008
Posts: 733
Reviews: 52
Country: I wish i knew...*blinks*
414 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey if ok with you TN, Satikas single. She might want to claim Slade if thata alright with you though... Smile

_________________
Lifewas radical rightafterImetthe monster. Later,life becameharder,complicated. Ultamitely,aliving hell. Like swimmingagainst a riptide,walking thewrongdirection inthefastlaneofafreeway,wakingfrom tehsweetestdreamstofindyourselfinthemiddleofa nightmare.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger
LunaBuna43   View This User's Portfolio
(oT..To)
Epic Novelist

63
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 13
Joined: 27 Jan 2008
Posts: 2555
Reviews: 63
Country: In Granola Bar Land, eating all the s'mores
300 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey is it ok if my char(s) are Nekos??

_________________
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
My first puppers Pikapet
My second puppers Pikapet
Check out my new group! Roleplayers Unite!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger
TNCowgirl   View This User's Portfolio
Princess of Storybooks and Queen of DTWH!!
Writer of Legend

99
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 17
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 5710
Reviews: 99
Country: USA
1720 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is also fine with me. Very Happy

_________________
Christ Paris: A guy the world gave up on. The plane he was flying disappeared Nov. 1 of this year. A few days ago the searchers gave up the search. May he prove everyone wrong and still be alive.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
*singerofthenight*   View This User's Portfolio
just stole your pickle! Wha hahaha *runs off*
Speaker of the Forum

52
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 16
Joined: 16 Jan 2008
Posts: 733
Reviews: 52
Country: I wish i knew...*blinks*
414 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok hey when are we suppose to start writing this thing?

_________________
Lifewas radical rightafterImetthe monster. Later,life becameharder,complicated. Ultamitely,aliving hell. Like swimmingagainst a riptide,walking thewrongdirection inthefastlaneofafreeway,wakingfrom tehsweetestdreamstofindyourselfinthemiddleofa nightmare.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger
canislupis   View This User's Portfolio
Hello!
Speaker of the Forum

341
Gender: Gender:Female
Age: 13
Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 730
Reviews: 341

300 Points

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Selena

Race: Clairvoyant

Appearance: Ice blue eyes, piercing gaze. Light-brown hair. Average hight

Personality: Intelligent but quiet. Observant. makes few friends but sticks by them.


And a second?

Name: Mark

Race: Sorceror

Appearance: Dark hair and green eyes. Slightly smaller than average height/weight.

Personality: Slightly sarcastic humor, but gets along well with his friends. Kind.

_________________
Check out my contest! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31705.html

We do not inherit the land from our ancestors, but borrow it from our children.

~Native American proverb
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
This thread was created on February 5, 2008
Post new topic   Reply to topic
   Young Writers Society Forum Index -> Storybooks » Storybook Archives All times are GMT
Goto page 1, 2, 3 ... 9, 10, 11  Next
Page 1 of 11

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
You cannot attach files in this forum
You cannot download files in this forum
This thread was created on February 5, 2008

Graphics By Bobo | YWS Sword & Shield Logo by Bobo
Bartemius says, Eat your vegetables. - Your Mom
Contact | Memberlist | Copyright Policy | YWS Store | Site Map
Facebook |  Goodreads |  Live Journal |  MySpace |  Wikipedia

© 2004 - 2008 The Young Writers Society