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Gaia
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 Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 2:16 am Post subject: Gaia |
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Gaia
Sitting like a stone
I'm watching, watching
People walking by, passing by
No one ever stops to watch or think about it
No one did
What if the world shuffled around
And one day we might not see it
We're not doing a single thing
We're living just to live
When will we find the reason?
By walking around I see what's wrong in the world
Don't lose the feeling inside your hearts
For it is only once in your life
So feel
Lying on the sand, counting
The clouds that fill the sky
I wonder if
Someone's in the heaven looking back down on me
I don't know
Such a waste to believe
Sadly, when you've grown
When the world is now you're home
You seem to forget about it
Hey, so far it is all alone
Aren't you worried that one day she'll be gone?
Don't lose the feeling inside your hearts
For it is only once in your life
So feel
Walking through the coast
No one cares in this world
Here she comes to play
Her touch is all mine, for a day
There are a lot of moment in this time
Don't let it trouble your mind
Speak, act and be heard in this life
So feel
Oh, I'll shout out loud
It won't be so long now
Until someone hears me
Like a radio
Yes you can, yes you can
Sometimes that is the problem
Feel, my little friend
So feel
Breezing through the wind
My hair is blown away
Everyday should always be a good day
Oh, I'll shout out loud
It won't be so long now
Until someone hears me
Like a radio
It's not easy to explain
But just try to see it
Yes you can, yes you can
With your own eyes, you'll see it
So feel
Yes you can, yes you can
Because I can, because I can
Feel, my little friend
Feel
Breezing through the wind
My hair is blown away |
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| Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 5:16 am Post subject: |
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 I loved it!!
I can hear this one as a song. You had pretty good rythm.
And this is my favorite part:
Oh, I'll shout out loud
It won't be so long now
Until someone hears me
Like a radio.
I dunno why... it was cool.
Awesome job. |
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