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Shadeslayer
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 Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 10:46 pm Post subject: |
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i woke up and suddenly i wasn't at the pet store...
where am i??? my tiny fish brain screamed. i want to go home!!!!
i swam around and around i swam left and right and then i swam up and i hit my head on this kind of forcefield.
OW!
Let me out!!!!!!!!! well that didn't work
let me try reverse phycology, Don't let me out!!!
then suddenly the forcefeild tipped over and i was on the floor struggling to breathe.
And then a few seconds later everything went black... |
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Kim
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| Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:16 am Post subject: |
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ok so i live in this tiny glass bowl, where there is absolutely no privacy. i mean none at all! i can barely move around in here.
my exercise consists of going in circles and everyone pokes there fingers at me, atleast give me a castle to hide in or something.
for entertainment, i watch my bubbles float to the top, and my poo float to the bottom.
So if you are thinking of getting your kid a pet, give them a puppy and let us swim in the deep blue with no boundries. being fish bait beats a round glass bowl. |
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EERC
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| Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 11:12 pm Post subject: |
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A creativity test... Not a creative person though I may give it a try:
What the hell? Time for changing my water? I don't mind clean water but I can't take the little glass. What do they think I am? A hermit crab? And after comes the dog again, barking at me but I don't speak dog, he doesn't get it and it's the same thing for that kid. In days like this I wouldn't mind the company of a sexy beta fish, I don't care about her agressive nature. *sigh*.
Well, that was all folks. |
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Lynlyn
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| Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 2:31 am Post subject: |
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A DAY IN THE LIFE OF RUPERT THE GOLDFISH:
Rupert swim.
Rupert swim.
Rupert swim.
Rupert swim.
Rupert hungry!
Rupert eat, nom nom nom.
Rupert poo?
Rupert swim.
Rupert swim.
Rupert swim... |
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