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Unexpected Love chapter 3
Unexpected Love chapter 3
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Which picture is better?
Bunny 1
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Bunny 2
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 4:58 pm    Post subject: Bunnies! Reply with quote
I originally drew these to drive my dad crazy, cus I want him to get me a bunny rabbit. Very Happy Here they are, tell me what you think!!
[EDIT] It says I can only have one attachment. I'll post the other one as a comment....

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Here is the second one!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
These are really nice, canis! I haven't seen your drawings for such a long time, you've gotten really good!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks... Hopefully my drawings HAVE improved a little. Smile At least I'm not drawing stickfigures anymore. Smile

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Very nice.
They remind me of those films with the single voice. The Narrator and then all the little pictures of cute things... Yah XD

I think the second one is better. It looks more alive! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yeah, I guess you're right about that... well you're a lot better than you were when you were 5 years old! (how's that?!)

I agree that the second bunny is better. It looks more alive and vivid and all that.... so yeah, bunny2 for the win!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 7:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like the first one best, as it looks more accuarate. The second one is in a better pose, but its head looks a bit squewiff. If you could fix its head, then I'd like that one best, as it reminds me of Watership Down. Smile

Did your dad get you a rabbit? (Since the wolf was out of the question Wink)

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
He's still deciding..... Smile

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
wow, these are good canis, you have the symmetry down, and the shape is perfect. i love these, keep going you definately have a talent.

awesome job.

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Thanks Kim. Smile Any suggestions on how to fix the head?

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Wow.

You're amazing.

(The first one is better.)

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
These are really good, I like the second one best Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
so cute! I really like your style of drawing. Kudos.
And please let us know if you get the bunny rabbit :p
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Good job. I couldn't decide which one was better. A little cartoony, but still. They were excellent. I hope to see some new bunnies soon.

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