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Needles and Roses - Chap. 8
Needles and Roses - Chap. 8
by KJ in Advanced Critiques
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 4:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Snoink wrote:
I’m not quite sure how I died.


Well, Snoinkus. That's profound. xD

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ohh, snoink, a catchy phrase to start off with! makes me want to read more! drop a link, I am intrigued.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Well all of these just keep making me more and more self conscious ^.^

Annd here it is:

How was I to know he was going to hit me?

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ari sat in the shade of the tree, reading her book.

Pretty dull. >.< Razz

Everybody else's puts mine to shame...

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PenguinAttack wrote:


Annd here it is:

How was I to know he was going to hit me?


Ooo, interesting! I'm intrigued.

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Like any good fairy tale, this one starts off with "Once upon a time..."
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It is, on technicality, two sentences...



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