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Oh yeah! I am totally gonna do this. I am going to go and write a poem. I'll post it tommorow. So, animals doesn't have to be the main focus? Just like animals have to be in it? Please hurry and reply so I don't run out of time!!!
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| Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:58 pm Post subject: |
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Cool!
That's quite a few commitments, but only one with results........ Ten days to go!!!!! |
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 1:32 am Post subject: |
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Ok, I wrote this, and this is my entree!
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What is that? Gosh, it was terribly annoying!
The rustling grew louder, now more obnoxious, and I finally couldn’t take it any longer. My eyes snapped open and I whipped my head from off of my pillow, and looked around.
I stared right into the eyes of a big, black bear.
Panic took a hold of me, despite my sudden urge to scream. I was frozen in that spot, in my sleeping bag, in the tent. The bear was staring at me, waiting for me to make a move. Its fur was ruffled in some areas, but otherwise, it was sleek as could be. It reminded me of my teddy bear, back at home. Except that this one was huge and staring right at me.
Its eyes were narrow and black, and it seemed to pierce through my eyes. There was silence, and then –
“R-R-R-RAAWR!” the bear growled, and I finally could belt out a scream that I was sure woke up the entire forest. I pulled myself up on my feet, and the bear growled and shook its furry head.
I backed up against the fabric wall of the tent, terrified. I am sure that I had wet myself a bit. My insides were freezing cold, and my muscles seemed to clamp up again. I was trapped inside a terrified body!
The bear took another couple of steps, and it was now standing on top of my sleeping bag.
The doorway was clear. Could I risk it? Being myself, a girly girl of eleven years old, I knew that I did not have the guts to pick up my frozen feet and scamper towards the door. But also, if I did not, the bear might attack me –
The bear made a sudden lurch at me, and my feet once again unlocked, but my legs did not, and I fell down, onto my brother’s sleeping bag. The bear was standing above me now, and I screamed for help.
I rolled out from under him and pushed myself towards the tent door. The bear roared again, and I scrambled to my Jell-o-y feeling feet. I wobbled into the forest, knowing that my parents would –
“Karen!” someone cried. I stopped and almost tripped over a branch of a tree. I spun to the right and saw my mother, running over to me.
“Mom! The-the-the tent! There is a b-b-bear!” I shrieked. She looked over to the tent. The door was open, but there was no bear inside of it.
“Karen! Don’t give me another scare like that again!” she scolded me.
“But-I-“ I couldn’t finish my sentence. The bear was gone. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 7:07 pm Post subject: |
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HMMM, very nice!
The judging will begin in 8 days. Good luck to all! (even if there are only two of you)
Does anyone think I should extend the deadline? PM me.  |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 12:32 am Post subject: |
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| please EXTEND! |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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The Ravens Fall
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A ravens craw in the southern skies,
A sound of fear for the Inuit spies.
A shot;
and a bang,
Another gift of their despise.
The ravens fall from the tree,
A call from death and straight to me
My love;
and my tears.
I'm the Raven clan; and I'm the key.
The deathly leader from the group,
Leading war to my troupe.
A death;
and a birth,
It's just another loop.
The raven guarded our way of life,
The gunshot produced all our strife.
Listen now;
and right here.
I'm the Reaper with my scythe.
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Wow. That's a bad composition. Trust me. I havent worked on it. With only 10 minutes spare it was all i thought of.
My story is about a wolf... I'll post it next time as I'm going to be getting on my plane soon! I'll be back on the forums within a week, if not before depending on the hotels computers.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 8:29 pm Post subject: |
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OK, thanks for letting me know. How much should I extend the deadline?
Rain: that was very creepy. I won't tell you what I think of it yet, but thanks for entering. Good Luck! |
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| Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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| I like the sound of this. Must remember to enter... |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:56 am Post subject: |
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Hey, thanks dory! I like your fishy avitars  |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject: |
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OK, thanks for telling me.
EXTENDED to November 10th! |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 6:01 pm Post subject: |
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Yayy! Yeah, sorry about the... freakyness
I wanted to do lıke Clan Themed stuff... I usually wrıte from a fantasy poınt of vıew so ıt was really... dıfferent
I`ve started on the story... It`s... dıfferent... and not the best 
I`m glad for the extensıon though
It means I can submıt after holıday now YAAYYY!
Anyhow...
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 12:24 am Post subject: |
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| ummm... how do we submit? |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, thanks for your interest in the contest. I would prefer you either giving me the link to your entry, or posting it directly on here. But if you would prefer it, you could also PM it directly to me.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 4:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh, and rain, your story was scary in a GOOD way. I think you did a good job on it. I can't wait to see your story. |
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