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death5614
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 Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:01 pm Post subject: |
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Jamel finaly came out of the portal. It seemed like ages inside it!
"Who the hell are you! What are you doing in my house?" Asked a man. He was in someone's house!
"Oh im sorry! ill leave!" Replied Jamel, as he ran out the door.
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SishBee
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 6:10 pm Post subject: |
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Tease quickly changed into a snake and slithered up over the alley wall after Miran, just in time to see him being sucked into a portal.
She canged back into human form and walked over to it. She didn't recognise it as any normal portal.
"Oh well, what could happen?" She pulled her hood up and her cloak billowed out behind her as she was swallowed by the portal.
~SishBee~
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death5614
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| Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 4:03 pm Post subject: |
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As Jamel kept running, he recognized someone! "Evil, is that you?" Asked Jamel.
"Yea, we need to go out and search for the other, they should be close by, we are still on Teil though!" Replied Evil Olive.
"What?"
"Yea, i sent us to a city on the other end of the planet, i didn't have the recourses to send us to a whole different planet."
"Well, i guess we could start looking for them. Then find the resources..."
"Thats up to the group." |
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