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Hello Kitty Steamboat

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:13 pm    Post subject: Hello Kitty Steamboat Reply with quote
CHORUS
Hello Kitty Steamboat
awoawoa
Hello Kitty Steamboat
de na de na
Hello Kitty Steamboat
awoawoa
Hello Kitty Steamboat
de na de na

As I walked along this lonely road,
stranger things unfold.
They break me up inside,
tearing though my mind.

Obsessions all collide.
We're on a hell of a ride.

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Take me back with you to your fairy tales
and your lonely ambitions will unfold.
Page by page they all unravel
characters all getting on this
oragami ship to nowhere.

Obessesions all collide.
We're on a hell of a ride.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
When I read the first couple of lines, I thought to myself, "No, she didn't seriously write this."

But, it suprised my. I actually found myself singing along to it. Quite a catchy song in fact.

Quote:
It's this hell of a ride.

Change this to... we're on a
I think it'll flow better.

Other than this, I think it's a great song.

Congrats and kudos

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 3:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
*twitch*

That was... CRAZY! XD it reminded me of this wicked crazy Japanese kid in my math class... but anyway...

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 12:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I liked this alot too. Awesome!

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
HOlas jin and wtf. lol it was actually kinda good...creepy good. LOL

It's unique...but i like it a lot. yayz for you. sys. lolz

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