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Watching Windows - Chapter 4
Watching Windows - Chapter 4

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 6:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The monster ran up, yelling that he was going to kill her! Then his foot got stuck in a hole and he fell to the ground while the girl ran away to live happily ever after.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Oh my god," she breathed, now knowing that it didn't really happen, "i'm going to the loonly bin aren't I?"

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 3:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

miyaviloves wrote:
"And no one knew what happened to them."


The thing is, I've actually read books like that. There was one by Margaret Peterson Haddix or someone like that where the book ended with the character jumping off of a rock and wondering if she would hit the ground without breaking her ankle. Something like, "she fell through the air, hoping she would be all right when her feet touched the ground. She thought she would."

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"All was well."

Guess where that's from >.<

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Boom!

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