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 Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:51 pm Post subject: “THE LIFE OF CRIME.” |
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“THE LIFE OF CRIME.”
Setting the screen, after losing his job Felipe is thinking about converting to the life of crime but this new occupation won’t be easy. Felipe is 20 years old and was working for a million dollar company. Molly is Felipe’s girlfriend she been dating him for about a year.
Act one: Fired.
Scene one: Sadness.
Setting: The living room.
Felipe is depressed by the fact that he lost his job and is talking to his girlfriend about it.
Felipe: “I can’t believe I lost my job I’ve been working for that company for two years now. I’m going to lose everything the house, you, my money, everything we own.”
Molly: “It will be okay honey.”
Felipe: not agreeing to what Molly is saying: “No It won’t, I’m going to lose everything.”
Molly, “Can’t you just look for another job?”
Felipe: “I already tired that, they don’t want me, they think I’m a failure .”
Molly, “You’re not a failure.”
Felipe, “I know. How do you convince the company that I’m not.”
Molly, “You can’t.”
Felipe: sarcastically: “Well that’s helpful.”
Molly: apologizing: “Sorry, but I don’t know how to help you.”
Felipe walks out of the room.
Act Two: The suicide plan.”
Scene One: Depressed.
Felipe has become very depressed after losing his job and is now thinking about ending his life.
Felipe: very depressed: “What is there is live for now that I lost everything?”
Felipe starts to pour gas onto himself when his girlfriend sees what he is doing.
Molly: yelling: Felipe! “What do you think you’re doing!?”
Felipe: “You can’t help, there is nothing left for me.”
Molly: “What about the life of crime?”
Felipe is shocked by what he is hearing.
Felipe: “Honey, you know I would never be a criminal.”
Molly: “My last boyfriend made over one million dollars as a criminal.”
Felipe: “Why didn’t you ever tell me this?”
Molly: “Because, you would have left me.”
Felipe: “Oh.”
Act Three: The criminal start.
Scene One: Pick pocketing.
Felipe decides to become a pick pocket.
He sets off for the streets. He sees a woman carrying a bag and decides to take it. He pills out a gun and demands the bag.
Felipe: In a demanding voice “Give me the bag!”
The woman has fear in her eyes as she hands Felipe the bag. Felipe takes the bag and runs off with it. The woman yells for help and a man hears her.
Woman1: “A man just stole my bag.”
Man1: “Where is he?”
Woman1: pointing: “Over there.”
Man one runs after Felipe and manages to reach him the two men start to fight.
Felipe: yelling: “Idiot! Can’t you see that I have a gun?”
Man1: “Yeah.”
Felipe shots the man; the man dies.
A person seeing the killing decides to call the police.
The police show up within five minutes but Felipe is already gone. The police are now investigating the murder.
Police1: “What was the time of death?”
Police2: “About five minutes ago.”
Police1: “How did he die?”
Police2: “He was shot in the chest.”
Police1 is now talking to a witness.
Police1: “What did the guy look like?”
Witess1: “He was about 6 feet tall and was wearing blue jeans and had on a red hat.”
The police officer thanks the woman.
Police1: “Thanks for the information.”
Witess1: “You’re welcome.”
Scene two: Planning a heist.
Felipe is panning out a bank robbery and hope to hire some people.
Felipe: talking on the phone: “Hello! Would you be interested in pulling off a bank robbery?”
Man2: “Yeah. Witch bank are we robbing?
Felipe: “The fifth national bank.”
Man2: “Okay”
Felipe: “Do you know where we can get a get away car?”
Man2: “You can use mine.”
Felipe, “Okay, good.”
Scene Three: The stake out.
Felipe and his employee are now staking out the bank
Man2: “So when is this all going to go to go down?”
Felipe: “Tomorrow.”
Man2, “Okay.”
Scene Five: The heist.
The two men enter the bank Felipe pulls out a gun and demands the money.
Felipe: “Give me all your money!”
The woman behind the counter hit the robbery button. The work fills the bag with the money and puts a ink bomb in it.
Felipe and his employee walk out of the bank with the money. The police show up.
Felipe: “Oh crap, it’s the police.”
Felipe and the man run into the car and start to drive away quickly. The police chase them.The car Felipe is in is going 130 miles for hour. Felipe and the police start to zig zag in the traffic. Felipe hits a car but manages to keep driving. The chase goes for a hour until Felipe drives onto a small road and the police are no longer able to chase him.
Scene Six: Back at home.
Felipe find out that there was an ink bomb in his bag and starts to get very ticked off.
Felipe: “Can you believe the luck we have? They put an ink bomb in our bag.”
Man2: “Darn it.”
Scene Seven: The Tv.
Felipe is watching the tv. when the news comes on about the bank robbery.
Tv: “Police are now looking for the people responsible for the bank robbery that took place earlier today.”
Felipe decides to turn off the tv.
Felipe: talking to himself: “I wonder how far the police are in their investigation.”
Man2 walks in.
Man2: “Did you see the new? They are talking about us?”
Felipe: “Yeah.”
Man2: “My brother operates a drug selling business. Would you be interested in making some money?”
Felipe: “How much are we talking?”
Man2: “About one million dollars.”
Felipe: “Okay, I’ll do it.”
Man2: “Good, we will meet him tomorrow.”
Scene Eight: The drug trafficking business.
Felipe goes to man2's brother house.
Felipe: “Nice to meet you.”
Man2 brother’s name is John.
Please elaborate.
John: “Nice to meet you also.” |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:03 pm Post subject: |
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| I moved it sprits. |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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| I want a storybook to play in like this one, but no one has one...I would start one, but I'm not good with that kind of stuff. |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:20 pm Post subject: |
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really just...people turning over to the life of crime...well, that's what the guy in this thread did. That's what we could do. Make our characters urban...know what I mean?
Living life on the streets. |
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| Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Okay, thanks. |
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