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Never Alone in Heaven
Never Alone in Heaven

by Explosive_Pen in Lyric Poetry
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((I don't mean to end it just to put it in a different direction maybe, like after the school blows up this other thing comes and they gotta stop it to be able to rebuild the school))

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((well ya I know what you mean. We gotta get this moving... YOU HEARD ME PEOPLE, GET THIS STORY MOVING!!!!!!!!!!!))

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 5:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Alright))

once everyone was back inside Nathan lightly smacked Gonzo upside the head. "Idiot that was like fifty feet!"

"Didn't hurt did it?"

"No, but still! Idiot!"

"Hey... are we the only ones left?" Coden asked.

"Just us, Vamire and Kage."

"Well when we get them out

"Oh calm down, you'll make the school explode."

"That's not such a bad idea, when we get them out lets blow up the school, get rid of the ninja's nicely."

"NO!" Gonzo shouted.

"It's a good idea Gonzo," Nathan said.

"No its not, you know what they'll do don't you? They'll send us back to that that that place! And I don't know about you but there is not a chance in hell that I'm going back there!" Tears rolled down her face as she spoke.

Nathan put his arm around her, "I swear I won't let them take either of us back there okay?" He looked up at everyone else, "so is it a plan?"

Coden and Mika nodded, "yes."

((Tada hope that helps))

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meribelle silently walked behind the group with Kai. She suddenly blurted out,

"I'm sorry if I hurt any of you, Kai saw you falling and said to jump. He said tackle anything I impact with so I'm sorry!"

Meribelle's words sped up as she ended. The group turned around Gonzo was crying, Nathan was comforting her and Coden and Mika had apparently said something. Everyone gave her an odd look.

"Uh, Meribelle?" Coden looked at her and snickered. "We already decided on a plan."

Meribelle put her innocent hamster face on, "Oops." She recalled what they had said. "Well," she continued slowly, "My tribe is in the mountains." She looked around then mumbled to herself, "If only I knew where the mountains were....."

Mika had a sudden thought, "Mountains, stone, people....lots of people?" she inquired.

Meribelle nodded.

"Well. We should go get them!" she jumped up, pointing a finger to the ceiling.

Kai considered the idea carefully from behind, "Well, if we get into any danger I can heal and be a guide. I think I've met your tribe before, Meribelle. Is the headmans name Cleon?"

Meribelle smiled and nodded her head eagerly, "He's my uncle."

Kai nodded thoughtfully, "We need to blow it up first..."

Meribelle turned back to everyone, "So, should we go to my family to help rebuild the school when we go KABOOM!?" She flung her hands up in the air to empathize the explosion.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Yeah," Gonzo said and leaned over to Coden, "should I be worried or is this what she's always like?"

"Yeah."

"Okay."

"How are we gonna make the school go KABOOM?"

"I'm going to use my powers," Nathan said.

"And I'm going to make sure he gets out just as it gets bad," Gonzo commented.

"No you're not."

"Yes I am, and I can kick your ass so I am staying with you."

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((This is to put it back on the first page))

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((keeping this on the first page is easier when other people post too))

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Coden grinned devilishly. "If things are gonna go boom, I am being part of the explosion."

Nathan turned towards Coden in surprise. "What do you mean?"

Coden rolled his eyes. "I mean I am not gonna let you have all the fun. Besides, it would take a hell of a lot of power to get this mother destroyed and chances are, you won't be able to do it alone."

'Gonzo' shook her head. "I can only get one person out of here..."

"Don't worry about me." Coden replied quickly. "I am not ready to die yet. Too much to live for."

His eyes fell on Meribelle, and he smiled.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mika looked at Nathan and Coden. They liked the plan wat to much and she wasn't going to let them have all the fun.

'Well i'm helping to' she stated.

'What can you do to help?' Nathan asked, raising an eyebrow.

'Well the whole place is wired up for electricity. All i have to do is increase the volts and Boom! All the electrical stuff will explode making lots of small fires and weakening the building'

'That helps us how?'

'It means that you and Coden will be able to blow the rest of the building up easier.'

Coden smiled and looked at all of the group.

'Well, what are we waiting for?'

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((I know its hypocritical but I'm having writers block, so if i don't post don't freak out on me okay?))

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 11:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(((Back to the first page, but i still can't think of anything darchoco's turn)))

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 11:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Ok everyone who still looks here, I think the board is dead as....well, a chipmunk head *inside joke* Anyways, I'm leavin' but if anyone makes another gifted board with a plot, I'll gladly join and rock da house when they PM me. Until then, I'm gonna stick to my swimming and occasional post to my storybook.))

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((ya I am outta here too. This isn't teenage superheroes anymore. sry to see u leave layleun. I was gonna hang on and see if it went any farther but now that ur gone there's no point. I am outta here. sry))

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((I'm out too, I'm just bored.))

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 6:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Lets just say Nathan died to blow up the school unless someone else brings the story back to life))

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