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 Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:50 am Post subject: Dragon Riders |
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Ok this might sound like Eragon, but I'll try to make it not. You'll have (obviously) a human or Elf and a dragon and color. it will be in the land of Keskasd. You can have magic if you wish, but also you can go without magic.
Human Name:Reskid
Gender: Male
Appearance: Albino
Dragon Name: Snolik
Gender:Male
Appearance: Snow White
Weapons: Dual Kantana blades
Abitlies: Uses no magic, but can move with great speed.
Snolik alighted on the grouund and Reskid slid off. Reskid walked over to the Elvin and dragon body. "Freska and Redkisk did well," Riskid said.
"Yes," answered Snolik, "I'll give them the proper funeral," and then Snolik set the bodies of Freska and Redkisk's body letting them turn to ash. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:58 am Post subject: |
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Human Name: Jeski
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Race: Elf
Appearance: Albino
Dragon Name: Jasper
Gender: Female
Appearance: Emerald Green
Weapons: back sword and knives
Jeski smelled burning flesh and Jasper turned toward it, there was a rider and dragon standing over burning ashes. THe landed a few feet away and Jeski slid off of Jasper's back.
"Friends?" She asked. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:03 am Post subject: |
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"Unless you came to fight us, then yes," answered Reskid. "My name be Reskid."
"And I be Snolik. Who be you?"
"I'm Jeski," answered the women.
"And I'm Jasper," said the women's dragon. "What happened here?"
"A death of a friend. Anyways, I'm from the Shefra area. Where be you from?"
"The Lokan area." |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:12 am Post subject: |
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Human Name: Acro
Gender: Male
Age: About 23
Appearance: Light brown wavy hair and light green eyes. Carries a beautiful Silver sowrd and wears a Dark green shirt and tan pants with brown leather boots when he's not in battle. When he IS in battle (and it is expected, not an ambush) he wears his fathers ancient silver armor.
Weapons: Sword and Staff (which he usually keeps strapped to Luna's back.
Abilitys: Can use magic and sword and can breath underwater.
Dragon Name: Luna
Gender: Female
Age: 356 (still pretty young for a dragon)
Appearance: A Magnificent Silver dragon with Dark Blue eyes.
Weapons: Claws and dragonfire.
Abilitys: Can fly faster than any dragon but has a unusual weakness to water. She can swim, but tries to avoid to at all costs. Uses magic but leaves that to Acro most of the time.
"Reskid!" Acro called down from atop Luna. "We have a war to fight! Quit loping around on the ground and get back in the air!"
"Redkisk and Freska are dead!" Reskid tried to call back, but Acro was already gone. Reskid looked higher up and saw Acro and Luna fighting another dragon. Acro's silver armor shone with blinding brilliance against the sun, but was no match for Luna's silver scales. After a few moments, the dragon and rider Arco had been fighting fell from the skies, landing in the forest a few yards away from Reskid and the elf. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:15 am Post subject: |
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Jeski looked the white dragon over, it was beautiful.
"I don't think i've ever seen a white dragon before." She said,
"Not many people have, they are rare." He said smiling.
"That is awesome," Jasper said, "I have a ton of relatives," She laughed, |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:25 am Post subject: |
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"Sorry, but I got to go," Reskid jumped onto Snolik's back. "Let's fly my friend," and Snolik jumped into the air and followed Luna's shining scales.
"Goning to let us have any fun," yelled over Reskid.
"Maybe not," Arco said and he and Luna flew towards the next dragon.
Out of the side of his vision, Snolik spotted an enemy dragon and dove for it. Reskid jumped onto the enemy's dragon's back and took out one of his Kantanas.
"Throw him off, Fracan," said emimy's dragon.
Reskid hit the human on the side of the head with the hilt and while the guy was dizzed he ran the blade through his chest.
Jumping off the dragon's back and landing on his, Reskid yelled, "Let's take this one down." |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:40 am Post subject: |
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Acro killed the rider while Luna took down the dragon. They fell to the forest below and a cloud of dust erputed from the spot.
"One down," Acro said looking around. "And only a few left. Good. The war is turning in our favor!"
"Then we can return home!" Luna's clear voice chimed in.
"Yes, my friend, then we can go home." Acro said, directing Lua towards their next foe. |
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Name: Eyan
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance: Short black hair with a blond streak and Blue eyes.
Abilities: Can't use magic. Is a fast healer though. Strong.
Weapons: A long sword. A dagger.
Dragon:
Name: Zarak
Gender: Male
Apearance: Solid black with a yellow streak going from his snout to inbetween his ears. Blue eyes.
Eyan was flying on Zarak when she saw two dragons up in the air with what looked like male riders. One of the dragons killed another one. They must be fighters she thought. She spun Zarak upside down to show his stomach as to say they are not an enemy. Zarak was excellent at spins and turns in the air. Eyan turned to see a red dragon coming at her with a man in some type of armor. The other two men were going to go at it, but had no chance. She left off of Zarak and onto the red dragon. She pulled her sword out and sliced then man's head clean off. She whispered "I'm sorry." To the red dragon, then jumped off. Zarak caught her and flew up and dug his claws into it, making it cry out in pain. Zarak's talon's were extra sharp. He slicew through it's wings like paper. The beast fell to the ground and landed with a thud. Unmoving. She landed with Zarak. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:59 am Post subject: |
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Acro directed Luna up beside the stranger.
"You a fighter too?" he asked.
"Sort of." the woman said. She patted her dragon on the neck and turned her head as Riskid flew up beside them.
"Nice bit of work, that." he said, nodding towards the fallen dragon and rider.
"Thanks." |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 2:17 am Post subject: |
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Name:Alania (Ah-la-na)
Race: Human
Gender:Female
Appearence:Tall, skinny, bony face, pale complextion, blond hair, blue eyes, always wears an old fashioned full skirt with a v-neck long sleeved shirt and pointy boots.
Weapons: bow, and sword
Magic: can create a circle of protection
Dragon: Namarhie (nah-mar-uh-hee)
Gender: Male
Appearence: Blackish greenish scales
Alania napped under a tree, Namarhie wasn't too far away and wide awake. If anything came too close Namarhie would fry it and take her away quickly. Alania was indifferent to the war that was going on, she knew about it but didn't care. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 2:24 am Post subject: |
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"Jeski, this isn't our fight." Jasper warned,
"But we can't just let them have all the fun." She laughed climbing on his back. Jasper laughed, "look behind us, that one is going to get ahold of them with out them knowing." She hissed,
"Then lets get him first." Jeski laughed. They took off into the air and stopped in front of the black dragon. The rider was covered in armor.
"I think it would've been smart to remember we don't have any protection" Jasper laughed as they dove for other dragon.
"We'll live," she pulled out one of her throwing knives and threw it at the riders head, hitting right in the eye where there was no protection, another one hit the dragon in the chest. Jasper flew over them and Jeski threw another in the man's skull. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 2:26 am Post subject: |
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"Well, I think we got this group of Greskelda," Riskid said indicating to the fallen dragons. "Well, let's get back to my tree hut. Want to come with us Jeski and, what's your name?"
"Eyan, do you want to come?"
"Sure," they both said.
"We can walk it's not far from here." |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 2:35 am Post subject: |
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"Alright. I think Zarak need to be on his feet for a while." Eyan said.
They walked for maybe 25 minutes until they reached a large tree with a large wooden house wrapped around it. Zarak flew up and landed on a large branch. And Eyan laughed.
*Can't think of much* |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 2:39 am Post subject: |
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Alania heard talking and woke up, if someone was around Namarhie would've fried them by now. She looked over and saw him sleeping just inside the trees. She stood up and walked around, coming face to face with a few people and dragons.
"Um... hello?" |
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