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DragonWriter
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 Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 6:01 pm Post subject: Very easy. the worst one wins! |
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Just write something. A poem, book , a play. the worst one wins. Spelling caounts in this. The worst what ever has to make sence, though.
what you win
the best= 10 points. 4 critques
the worst= 100 points. unlimited critiques |
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Kitty15
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| Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds easy...
I went to skool tooday,
Saw a dog on the way.
I waz very board,
Fownd my work so hard.
The sun shon brite
At such hiy hite.
The sky was blew,
It's always blew.
I went to skool tooday,
Saw a dog on the way. |
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Sumi H. Inkblot
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| Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 6:25 pm Post subject: |
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i saw a dawg
In his mowth a frog
a gren log
smely lyk bog
timy is frog name
he shuvs blam
ontu rober game.
:wince:
I can't believe I just wrote that....LOL. Well, when critiques are up for grabs, a woman'll do anything. xD |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:06 am Post subject: |
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Yo, said the dude
Why r u so rude?
I wuv you said the frog
I hate u said the dog(gie)
Do you like greeeeen eggs and yam?
Nuh uh, it's gren eegs and ham? Remember, duh...
Gosh, I hate hate hate when people
Do that. You know how rude they get? They think they know EVERYTHING when I am totally amazing.
Everyone's dumb. I win. |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 8:07 am Post subject: |
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Here's my entry:
The Unequivocally Deniably Specially Crazily Stupidly Specially Doofusly Dunce Poem
Blumboogers |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 3:30 am Post subject: |
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i huggles, and snuggles my puppyes
& wuffles them vewwy muchh.
they luv 2 run by the poppies,
so i named them bob & butch.
i also have a cat,
who lykes to lye on an mat
and lykes 2 chaase my pet rat,
who i named matt.
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Black Ghost
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 3:34 am Post subject: |
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Sounds fun! Maybe I should enter.
-Tony |
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whence
look, it's a whence.
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:11 am Post subject: |
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eMo D3tH 4eVeRR!!!1!!
i slit mai rists
an cut my throte
nevr kist
but alwayz chokd
ta deth an hate
all yall foolz
but its 2 l8
mai bloods in poolz
a crimsin bath
2 soke up sad
my arms in haff
it bledes reel bad
dreenk mai blood
to drown my lyfe
in red mud
an scarlit stryf
cryd 2 slepe
evry nite
i sobb an wepe
evry nite
cfut me open
an spill mai teers
me is cold an browkin
lyfz mai feer |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 8:40 pm Post subject: |
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I am sure you will think this is the worst 
Dragon wryter is bad at writing
wy wryte if yuo be dragon wryter
yuo shnt coz if yuo do itz bad
plz dont wryte dragon wryter
yuo are bad
EDIT: All views expressed in this post are the views of marsians and NOT Tempest |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 9:25 pm Post subject: |
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Attack of the ninja carrots
There was a caret who was fighting the lima bean master. The lima bean hits the caret, this causes the lima bean to blow up. The peeses of the exploded lima bean flew into the carets moth, and the caret was poisened. As the caret lay dying a giant choclate bunny came and ate the carrot. In revenge for the eaten carrot the ninja carrots decided to attack the jiant choclate bunny. They fout for a very long time until the bunny caused them all to fall into a exploding volcaneoe. As the ninja carets drowned in the lava, a ogre came and ate the choclate bunny up. The end |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 12:17 am Post subject: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! |
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| Ok, i am going to need some help judging them , I will post the winner tomorow. Oh and tempest have you ever evan read my writing? |
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Sumi H. Inkblot
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:19 am Post subject: |
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| I'll help judge I'm the grammar/spelling nazi, as Dragon-san knows all too well..XD |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:03 am Post subject: |
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No but surely such an insulting err text thingie must be the worst?
EDIT: Obviously I don't really think that about your writing |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 12:41 pm Post subject: |
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| Did Paolini write any poems, perhaps he should submit? |
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Sumi H. Inkblot
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 12:51 pm Post subject: |
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| Ofour wrote: |
| Did Paolini write any poems, perhaps he should submit? |
He sent a email to me as an entrance (didn't want to show his face 'round here):
"the big muscels of the dragin
Scare all hoo dar defi the Saphireness (like, the SAPHIRENESS, MAN!)
And im all, 'how DAR u defi my @WS0MN3$$!"
And ten da Mery Su of mi karakter coms and weelds his shinee sord
And te big blu ting dragin tht mi altr-egoo ovashados
'Cuz mi hed is teh syze of Hogwarts!
Orjinaliti! Hou i haat it! it shal nevah bi prezent in mah worx!
Let all YWS be agreed: I'm plagiarizing through and through!
No good-literachure seekah on mah forumz goes unpuniched!"
XD (I love Wicked....XD) |
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