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nemothegecko
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 Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject: The Lonley Fish |
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Splash
species: Fish
Color: sea Green
Height: 2 inches
Bio: He is all alone he has no family.
His parens died in a horrible shark attack that took both of their lives. Splash felt that it was all his fault. He had to start a new life it was hard but he made it. |
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| Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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Uhm.
Hey.
Maybe you should try posting Splash's story, so we can read and critique it? |
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| Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:58 pm Post subject: |
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| *moved to Writer's Corner for the time being* |
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 6:59 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry to confuse you so, but this is extremely random, so...
*moved to Randomness* |
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 7:08 pm Post subject: |
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| This looks like the start of a storybook to me. xD Where was it originally? |
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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It was originally in Action/Adventure Fiction. I moved it to Writer's Corner and PMed the author about it. He told me it was the beginning of a storybook, so if anyone could move it to storybooks, twould be great.
I apologize for the misunderstanding. |
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:36 pm Post subject: |
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*Moved to Storybooks*
Make sure the posts go in the right forum. |
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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| Um...is there anything to go off of here? |
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| Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 1:46 am Post subject: The Lonely Fish |
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Splash is looking for a home is the wild ocean. Where will he go?
He has no friends and does not know how to hunt. After a long night of hunting for a house he finds a sea anemone. Just like Finding Nemo. He goes on a huge adventure and ends up getting almost eat by a seagull. He has lost all hope in himself and would love someone to tell him what happens next. \\
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