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 Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:14 am Post subject: Drawings |
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Okay so, I did these and I would appreciate it if nobody took them and claimed them as their own, as I am somewhat proud of them. Please critique!
This is supposed to be Zinedine Zidane, if anyone here knows who he is.
This is just someone from my imagination
Image from scetch book-book, thing.
Please leave some helpful critique! I thrive off of them ... haha. |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:51 am Post subject: |
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Those are pretty good. Very good profiles actually (better than me)
The first guy's ear is kinda funky. Shaped odd. I dont know who the guy is so it might actually be that way.
The second guy's hair is kinda funny where the top of the head and the hair meet. The front of his forehead and the hair line dont match up.
I love the landscape piece. The water and stuff look very nice and the buildings in the back are very good. The part to the left doesn't really fit to me. It looks a little lopsided |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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Cool-
you are way better at drawing than me.
I love the landscape! Zinadine Zedane is very cool also.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:30 am Post subject: |
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I'm not big on the first one, the second one is much better. I think you may be a little unsure of yourself on these and it is causing you to apply much too light pressure with the utensil, don't worry--get some serious dark shades in there!
The landscape is pretty good, it has darker shades which I like =] |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:36 am Post subject: |
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| Wow! I think these are really good! I wish I could draw like that...I really like the last one! |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 3:21 am Post subject: |
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Thanks everyone!
About the first guys ear, it sort of does look like that...lol. I tried to make it look as realistic as possible but I still need quite a bit of work!
As for the landscape, yes, the left is lop sided, sadly, but again, I still need to practice!
I actually didn't scan these onto my computer I took pictures of them with my camera. My cellphone camera. That would explain why the pencil strokes seem so faint, they are a bit darker in real life.
It's either that or the fact that I have a terrible habit of using dull stubs instead of proper sharpened pencils... 
Thanks again for the helpfull critique! |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 12:03 am Post subject: |
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The ear on the first man looks very blocky. It doesn't really look like Zidane. His face is too long and his cheekbones are too big. His neck also looks too big for the size of his head.
The second man is much better. The detailing in his hair is really well done, though his ear looks pretty small.
The third drawing is alright. It would look cooler if it was colored. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 1:32 am Post subject: |
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those look really great.
the first picture though the guy's ear is a little messed up
and the back of the head goes up to high.
there's a little indention somewhere around where the head meets the neck!
it's real good. u should keep drawing >insert thumbs up here< |
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 2:06 pm Post subject: |
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These are well done let me now when you update ur pictures.  |
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| Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 3:05 pm Post subject: |
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OH WOW! i LOVE zizou!!!! he's the guy i admire!!!! and dat pic is real good!!!
the second guy, lol, it might be ur dream man *wink*
very good drawings!!! |
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