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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 12:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Take a look at my idea. No one else will give me one so we are soon to go with it.

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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 1:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The "darkness" idea is a good idea for the basis of the adventure, but what about the actual adventure itself?

I liked the idea of everyone splitting up. Then, maybe everyone could investigate different events caused by the darkness, maybe have a battle or two, and then the group can get back together, pool their information, and then continue to the final battle.

Kinda a rough draft, but that's all I can think of. I've got my own ideas for my character, as I'm sure everyone does, so I think the best thing to do is just get up and leave, battle or no battle, and get the adventure underway.

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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

right, give everyone a day, then I post tommarow.

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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woah woah woah woah.... so this darkness thingy is a PARASITE? is the darkness alive or just a metaphor (Sorry guys i just found the thread)
Next time you make a thread anthony, put a link to it so that we don't have to go seraching for it. It was on page 4!!!!!! Grrrr................... Evil or Very Mad

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join my Storybook, now would be a great time for a new character to come in. Wink
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Does anyone know what creates darkness? Part of it the fear of being powerless so one must find a way to be strong. Another is the greed and lust of power once they have found the way to be strong. And like Blackwings' metaphore, darkness is in everyone. It grows in everyone and will never go away know matter how hard you try. Everyone is greedy and everyone has a lust for something. I mean look what happened in the Lord of the Rings series. The elves, dwarves, and men became greedy with the rings of power they recieved and look what happened to them.



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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 3:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, well, I'm not going to be able to post anymore on my character, so I have to quit. Sorry guys, and I hope this storybook does well!
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 9:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Okay, well, I'm not going to be able to post anymore on my character, so I have to quit. Sorry guys, and I hope this storybook does well!


*falls to the floor, screaming up at the heavens* NOOOOOOOO!!!!

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Yeah, we'll miss you, misspriss! Crying or Very sad

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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yes, we will.

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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2007 10:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well...this is bust. But it does make me think of a song by Queen.

Another one Bites The Dust..........Another one Bites The Dust..........And Another one's Down and Another one's Down....Another one Bites the Dust!


Okay that was mean. I'm sorry but bye now....We miss you already.
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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seriously... when are we going to continue? Otherwise, this storybook is going to die before the story really got going. Crying or Very sad

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Soooo... I'm assuming that the storybook is dead. Crying or Very sad

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

no, when i have time to really come on i'll bring it back.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I am just waiting patiently for others to post. But I will be in as soon as someone continues it.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

piepiemann22 wrote:
no, when i have time to really come on i'll bring it back.


YAY! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, i'm back and in a day or so we'll be up and running.

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