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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:03 pm    Post subject: Thread of Destiny Reply with quote

So we don't crowd up the story book we'll have our conversations here.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay well...I had this idea that maybe we could use. What if a battle happens before the journey? Would that work? It's a really stupid idea I know and I already posted on the story book about this idea. If it doesn't work, then someone can make the information the king has faulty and the scouting party could be captured and killed. It was a thought.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ya... maybe like some guys come back with the heads of the scouts. and then they try to kill us. One gets away, and we follow him... possibly.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't like the idea of the battle happening before the journey. Perhaps we could have a small battle near the beginning of the journey, but wouldn't it be best if it was near the end?

My thinking is this, if the battle is at the end, a group that doesn't work together well gets to know each other better as they journey, and at the end, when the battle takes place, they can work together.

*shrugs* Just putting in my two cents.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 9:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

there both good ideas, maybe combining them. As were traveling were get into scermishes, then a big battle at the end.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

As we're traveling, we should go into towns 'n' stuff, for random character development (kinda like an RPG game.)

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that is a good idea too. This will be interesting

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm stomped, any idea's on how to cntinue?

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Honestly, I'm tired of just sitting around discussing how and when we are going to leave on our mission (in the storybook). Let's just get up and go!
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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, give me a second.

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have to agree with misspriss on this one. I had another idea on how to continue because the battle one won't work. What if we were to go to Cardac and find the scouts. However the scouts would be dead because the dark army had a small squad and they happened to be looking for something. Here's the point, how about the thing they were looking for was a clue to how to destroy them. And then our characters can follow the clues to the (fill in the blank) which will destroy them. It sounds really complicated. Has anyone ever seen the movie "National Treasure"? it kind of goes like that with the clues and whatever.
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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 11:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I need time to think, though I have a good idea. What is we got many leads on what to do. We would split up into groups a meet again later on. I need to fill in the blanks, but it may make it interesting.

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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 9:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I'm almost done, but I need to know if this is a good idea? If so I'll post soon, if no one coments, we'll go with it. You have 2 days!

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 12:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Darkness is nothing but an entety that forms in a living being. A power that takes control if you're not careful and dig to deep. Azel wields it, but it controls his will seeking it's true goal, destruction of light. Light is the hope and love in the hearts of the many, so if darkness succeds, all life shall end. Do you understand?

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought we were supposed to be coming with ideas for how to proceed. Not quoting things from wherever. we need to think of some ideas or this storybook will be in the crapper pretty soon. I apologize for saying the crapper but it's true.
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