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moosiegirl
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Country: some elegant Masquerade lost in the ruins of time...
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 Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:51 am Post subject: TIME |
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People say
what they like
you cant change
whats inside
your the bread
and im the butter
we have gotta
stick together
cause times awasting
and times agone
theres not much left
for us
so just pick up your sorrows
and head out west
CHORUS
troubles come and troubles go
like the worlds bottled up
we wont last forever
and watch all the setting suns
but times awasting
and we havent got much left
END CHORUS
trains come and go
beyond the dirty tracks
we walk along
cars wizzing past
people can point
and they and holler
but they just cant dampen
the spirits already broken
when the going gets so tough
your my sun
and my stars
lighting up my way
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Alainna
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| Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:37 pm Post subject: |
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This is good, what genre of music would it be? It sounds kinda country.
This didn't make sense:
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people can point
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Great work, keep it up
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moosiegirl
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| Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:57 am Post subject: ur right |
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it is country and ill change that part that doesnt makes sense
ty
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