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JC
We are all born mad. Some remain so. Master of the Forum

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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:00 pm Post subject: Philosophy of the Dark a.k.a POD |
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Hey, I'm writing a novel, Philosophy of the Dark. Chances are you've seen it here, maybe you've even looked at it.
I am in desperate need of critiques, of which I really don't have any. It's a depressing fact. And I don't know if I should continue posting them because of the lack of replies. So, if you would like to read it, please, please do. |
_________________ But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett |
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Ares
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:07 am Post subject: |
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I don't know you, but I looked in your portfolio and you've posted a lot of stuff. Have you critted other people?
You might try swapping crits or PMing people who offer them.
I'll see what I can do though. |
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JC
We are all born mad. Some remain so. Master of the Forum

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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:55 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, I crit a lot of stuff. Mostly things that nobody have critted yet, if its a popular story, I tend not to reply to it, just because they have enough people doing that. It's the people who don't get replies I read. And I don't do poetry, I can't write poetry, so why would I crit it? And people who have continued stories and stuff, like books they're posting, and nobody's reading just because there's so much, I crit those too. So...yeah...
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Writersdomain
Oh, YAY! Master of the Forum

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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:58 am Post subject: |
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I'd be happy to look at some of your stuff and crit it to the best of my ability. The title is quite intriguing.
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And thy sorrows a fortress
Thy tears a shield of glass."
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JC
We are all born mad. Some remain so. Master of the Forum

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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:53 am Post subject: |
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Thank you! I struggled with if for a while, wondering if it was to...cheesy goth or something. I'm glad to hear it's not! =D
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