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My Love For You
My Love For You

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 11:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You can come in.... just there is becoming a lot of "Legendary warriors" think lord of the rings, not all the warriors are kings queens or famopus people. Be one of the main characters just not one of the "Elite few"

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join my Storybook, now would be a great time for a new character to come in. Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In that case, I want to join too! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 9:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aliena quickly darted behind a wide stone column as soon as she spotted someone coming down the hallway. She would be fired in an instant if she was caught, and she really needed to keep this job.

She had nowhere else to go.

However, she didn't understand why it was forbidden for castle servants to see the Elite warriors without express permission. Why keep saviors hidden?

She was deeply curious as well. And why had the king picked so many warriors? So far, Aliena had seen two thieves, three swordsman, and a man wearing a dark cloak that had made her skin crawl just looking at him. However, Aliena did feel a sense of pride in her spying; a corridor full of the kingdom's best warriors, and none of them had noticed her yet.

She couldn't stay for much longer however; every second she was gone from the servants quarters was another second that someone could notice Aliena was missing. Or, she could get caught by one of the Elite and be accused of being an enemy spy. That would be worse.

However, Aliena wasn't afraid of the consequences. She wanted to see the warrior that was rumored to be the slayer of darkness.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Revan stopped in the hallway. He couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. He turned around quickly and spotted a stone column but no one was there. Whoever it was was surely skilled in hiding. He turned back around and continued to walk. He stopped again and placed his armored hand on the wall. He then said some of the ancient language. His hand glowed and stopped. With this, he could see the entire hallway without being in it. Maybe it will catch whoever is following me, he thought. He continued down the hall, focusing on the magic he had placed. So far no one. He heard a scuffling noise. As he turned around he could have sworn he saw a young woman dash for safety. He then noticed that the person stopped right in the front of his magic.
"You can stop hiding." Revan said. He heard a gasp and then footsteps that sounded as if they were running. He shook his head and withdrew the magic. He was alone was again.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 3:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dammit, dammit, dammit, dammit, dammit! Aliena swore internally as she ran down the hallway. Of course you didn't consider that you could get caught with magic, DID you? she reprimanded herself. Now that warrior is probably going to tell someone about it, and once word gets around that you weren't in the servant's quarters...

Aliena hit something solid and fell to the ground. "Ouch!" she exclaimed, rubbing her head.

"Where are you going in such a hurry?"

Aliena gulped. It was another Elite... she could tell from the boots.

She was in SO much trouble.

Aliena slowly made eye contact with the warrior.

"Uh, hi."

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You can come in. The more the merrier.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ramza looked down at the woman who ran into him. He held out his hand, "You okay miss?"

She took his hand nervesly.

"It's okay, don't woory. Let me guess, you ran into Reven. He scares everyone. Would you please fallow me there's something I would like to show you?

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 3:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol I'm sorry Anthony I have to point this stuff out.... She said she Ramza is a guy... and follow isn't spelled fallow

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join my Storybook, now would be a great time for a new character to come in. Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

kyles appeared beside he group that was quickly forming. "Something starting without me here?"

Revan gave a dark glare to him. Ramza shrugged his shoulders. "This girl just appeared at of nowhere. I'm escorting her to the throne room.'

kyles grinned. He winked at the newcomer and said. "Careful. Ramza bites."

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Well, now that I've found a place to enter, count me in too.)

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

An emerald green dragon slowly comes around a near by corner, surveying the scene before him.
"It's generaly a bad idea to bite a dragon," he says. His form suddenly becomes hazy, then condenses into an adolescent human. "They usually bite back." He chuckles quietly. "Tassen Spellbinder, at your service."

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Kyles walked up enthusiastically and clasped tassen's hand. "Tassen! I didn't know you were invited to this. I thought you weren't on good terms with the king?"

Tassen shrugged his shoulders and grinned. "You aren't either, are you? Besides, this kingdom is all thats left to protect, and i don't want to be off doing some secondhand job for a no name farminghand. This is so much more fun."

Ramza rubbed his forehead in furstration. "This group is getting more and more interesting every day..."

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Piper surveyed the newcomer, her golden eyes sparkling with curiosity.

"A shapeshifter," she muttered to herself. "That could be helpful."

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Kyles kept a hidden eye on Piper. Those golden eyes mystified him, and he could not see through them. His urge to find out what she knew grew even deeper. Piper connected her eyes with his. He quickly looked away, nervously picking at the hilt of his damascus daggers.

She was a loyal servant to the king, and he could not understand her at all. That was more than enough reason to hate her. But why did he seem to have some strange attraction to her?

not an attraction... kyles thought, But there is something.

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"So are we just going to stand in this corridor all day?" Tassen asked.

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