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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:26 pm    Post subject: Erica Reply with quote
any c&c on these pictures?
The first is my most recent one~



an older one here, but i put much more time into this one n__n;;;
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 2:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I love all three dress, nice colours too. I think the first girl's left hand is not as great as her right hand, you could work on that by looking at your own or asking someone to pose.

The parasol in the second picture sticks out, looks as if you added it in just to get rid of some of the background. Why don't you have one of the girls holding it?

I would love to see your other pieces.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 2:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks very much n__n
the parasol was really added as a background kind of thing; the picture is rather random and not meant to be a particular 'scene'.

I have more art at my Deviantart page, here~
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I adore the parasol!

Yeah, the first girl's left hand is really awkward. The fingers are held strangely and I think the arm is too long.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I really like your style, it's very cute.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 5:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like the dress she's wearing in the first one. The wrinkles in the clothing are subtle, yet effective, and the colors are well done. The only thing that I would add to the first one are legs. ~_^

In the second drawing, the wings on the girl on the left are a bit too subtle. I couldn't see them until I saw the pic for the second time. But that might just be me not paying attention. The outline for the umbrella/parasol thing looks a bit odd, so you may want to fix that.

Good job! I can't wait to see more.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 6:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
So pretty! I love the colors... and everything. ^_^!!

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks everyone! <3
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Wow, these are really good! I love your shading and coloring in both of them! Smile

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