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Black Ghost
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 2:29 am Post subject: Art Report |
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Hey guys, I have a report on "the creation of adam" by Michelangelo, and I already have all the info for writing it. The only problem is that the info has to be in a first person creative narrative and I'm kinda blank on what the story should be about.
The report has to be 3-5 pages and It's due fri. so i have to start writing as soon as possible. Does anyone have some ideas about the setting or the way I should present the facts in the first person narrative?
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 3:47 am Post subject: |
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I suppose you could write it from Michelangelo's POV, couldn't you? That might be difficult... Is it a character then who was present, or near present to the time (Renassaince) that's meant to be narrating?
It could always be fun to write it from the perspective of whomever commissioned it (it was comissioned by the Church, yes?) or of someone nearby.
Could you write from some apprentice boy's perspective, as he watches it all and learns how it's done? |
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Black Ghost
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 12:08 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks, those are really good suggestions |
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| I agree completely with Imp. |
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