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~Volant~ Novelist
Joined: 08 Sep 2007 Posts: 345 Country: You Es Ahy!! haha
Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 12:09 am Title:
Menzobranzen?! Better than fricken Long beach?! That's a joke! There's no sunlight here and creepy huge things everywhere and if you don't worship the spiders they eat you!!! XD haha. No, Long Beach is definately cooler. haha.
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:51 pm Title: Thanks For Your Comment
I really appreciated the amount of work ypu put in to revise this piece! It really is complecated to portray your ideas without being too repetitive. Would you, (as a reader) prefer to see my pieces combined into one?
Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Thanks For Your Comment
I've made some changes as I've seen fit and thanks for you help and suggestions. To answer you question it fits somewhere in the middle but if you free time, my pieces are very short, I reccomend you read some of my other work expecially the ones pre-Stellar's Pub, Gimico's Travel, Thomas woke up in a haste of exictement and well anthing else that catches your eye. Hope you enjoy my work on these characters.