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Favorite Song: 
Longshot
(nevertheless),
Crawl (Superchick)
Favorite Food: 
Bread sticks
Favorite Movie: 
Chronicles of Narnia
(1 &2)
Favorite Author: 
C.S. Lewis,
Christopher Paolini,
Ted Dekker, Frank
Beddor
I Want To Be A: 
Maybe a writer...
My First Book Will Be: 
Broken
Best Book Ever: 
Eragon, Looking
Glass wars, Inkdeath
 
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Joined:  30 Jul 2008
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Interests:  Writing (Duh), Computer graphics, procrastinating.
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Gender: Female
Birthday: 18 Aug 1995
Biography: Weelll, for one I'm homeschooled, gives me more time to write then I know what to do with. I love to write fantasy, not to good at anything else really. Erm, what else. Nothing, great....
 
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Rosey Unicorn
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Joined: 24 Nov 2008
Posts: 728
Country: Canada
Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 11:45 pm    Title: Reply with quote
Good thing I remembered to check your profile!

A quick tip: Usually when you reply to somebody, you do so on their guestbook. Then one doesn't have to remember who to check for responses.

You're supposed to read over your work two to five times before you post it anyway. And after a total overhaul that's needed.
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.:Elf:.
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Joined: 30 Jul 2008
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 12:24 am    Title: Reply with quote
Possibly, though I just read the first chapter and its really rough. We shall see...
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Rosey Unicorn
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 8:51 pm    Title: Reply with quote
I just saw your first review. Does that mean Broken is coming soon?

Anyway, keep at it and you'll get better. It might help to look at some of the Instructer's critiques to see how they do it.
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ATreeah
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Joined: 22 Sep 2008
Posts: 141
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 5:07 pm    Title: Reply with quote
hi there
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Joined: 29 Mar 2008
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Country: Switzerland and The Netherlands
Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 6:00 pm    Title: Reply with quote
Hey,

WELCOME TO YWS!!

Noticed you were quite new, so I just had to leave a comment Razz

PM me for anything Very Happy

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Ps. Vegetarianism for the win!![/i]
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