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    Biography: It was a hot, humid day in the Amazon. My father was fending off the natives as the doctor took care of my pregnant mother. The shaman then came and.... Na, I'm just kidding. I was born in Bismarck, North Dakota. I've moved once but I stayed in the same town. My dad owns a stock broking business and my mom is a retired nurse. I was first inspired to write a story in seventh grade when my English teacher made us. It was the first time I ever wrote in a normal story form and I've been hooked ever since. I've never finished a story, though, since I always get new ideas that fascinate me more than the last.
     
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    EliteHusky
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    Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:10 pm    Title: Thanks For Your Comment Reply with quote

    Thanks for your comment, I'll give it a try and hopefully readers will a more enjoyable and less confusing time.

    Sincerely,
    -Elitehusky
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    EliteHusky
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    Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:53 am    Title: Thanks For Your Comment Reply with quote

    Glad to hear that you've read some of my other pieces although you hit the marker by saying that the Thomas Pinewood, Falice etc. pieces are relevant. I've been told several times that numbering is better just as you suggested as well as combining them together for collections. As a reader, would you prefer to have numbers on all of the pieces, or would it be rather more lengthy to combine them as collections and then publish them to your discretion. I'd appreciate you views whenever you have a break and thanks again for your comment.

    All The Best,
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    RandomGrrl
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    Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 4:06 am    Title: Reply with quote

    Ha, I was just thinking about that. I'm going to read it as soon as I unpack it. Just moved. When I find the book, I will start it. Very Happy Thanks for the reminder! What's new with you?
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    RandomGrrl
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    Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:40 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Heh, I hate that too... The reading over your shoulder.
    Well, I'll have to get on Snakehead then, because Scorpia was my fave, so if I read the next one... Hey, maybe things'll change? Very Happy
    See ya.
    Have you ever noticed that people always say that, when what they MEAN is "see the tiny little avvie in the corner of whatever you've written?" Very irritating. Note to self: stop saying "see ya."
    Anyways...
    RG
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    mikedb1492
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    Joined: 24 Feb 2008
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    Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:44 am    Title: A bit of off time.... Reply with quote

    Well, I've got a bit of news. My laptop, which holds all my writing material, currently has a charger that won't... well... charge. So I can't turn it on until I buy another for as much as $100 bucks, which sucks, but I don't think it will be too long since I've got money saved up.
    Anyway, this means I probably won't be posting any add ons to any of my stories for a while. I'm writing this from my family computer now, and I would write my stories on this, but I hate it when people read what I write over my shoulder and my family tends to do that alot. I'll probably still write a few reviews on this, though.

    Well, That's all for now. So long.
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    RandomGrrl
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    Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:01 am    Title: Reply with quote

    hey, yeh. I still haven't read Snakehead. My bro is hounding me. "Read THE BOOK!" Very Happy See ya round.
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    mizz-iceberg
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    Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:00 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Heyy Mike!! What happened to the First Born story?? Have you written more? Be sure to post it up. I can see you have trouble sticking to one idea. I have a quadrillion first chapters belonging to stories that either I got bored of, or stopped writing because I found a better idea. But I do hope you finish the First Born.
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    RandomGrrl
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    Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:10 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Oh, hey, just noticed you like Anthony Horowitz... He rocks! My li'l bro got me into him. Have you read the Raven's Gate books, or Alex Rider, or what?
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    RandomGrrl
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    Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:08 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Hey! I'll just join the fray and say thanks for your help... I made some changes to Reverting, but not sure I like 'em... Anyway, next section is out there if you're interested. If not, no pressure! Smile
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    Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:40 pm    Title: Hey Reply with quote

    Hey, thanks for your review of my Chapter One. Grammer is not my strongest subject! Smile but anyway, if you ever need anything reviewed, let me know!
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