Okay, I know rhyming schemes have suffered a lot, but let not the Jacob of cynicism supplant your iambic foot. It's the music base in me, the most emphatic element of my poem was the rhythm, and the rhyme was the tool to that. Not so painful if you read it real fast and think of Sondheim. See you have a sense of word play and sonics, you know your ass from your assonance, the rhymings all part of that insanity. Thanks for the comments by the way, I owe you fornicative favours. Dying to crit that poem of yours, when I get a minute.
