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Alana: The life of a martial arts master, Chap. 1
Alana: The life of a martial arts master, Chap. 1

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    Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I agree that I should focus more on writing in first person but I wanted to portray some of the events from Igor's point of view to better the effect of a future piece. I'm also terribly sorry for the length of that piece as I like to keep them short but filled with emotion and descriptions. Thanks again for your comment, revisions have been made accordingly and I strongly hope you read some of my previous pieces especially the one about the Garden Gnomes! (It's a nice, funny and short piece).

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