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CassandraInvisible
Writer
Joined: 03 May 2008
Posts: 74
Country: New Zealand. Oooh.
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 6:10 am Title: |
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Hey there.
Canada! Yay!
I have cousins there.
It's my goal to spend six months over there when I'm finished with high school. |
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J. Wilder
Senior Writer
Joined: 12 Dec 2004
Posts: 202
Country: Long Beach, California
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 1:54 am Title: |
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| No problem. Yeah, actually, combining them might be easier because there would be less explaining to do. You would just have to introduce everthing once at the beginning and it might be easier to follow. |
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PenguinAttack
Speaker of the Forum
Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 679
Country: There's just me.
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| Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 9:05 am Title: |
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It was perfectly okay. ^.^ Thank you for the reply, it was terribly sweet. I appreciate how much work you put into the story itself and cannot wait to see more.
*Hearts* Le Penguin. |
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wellmanwriter
Junior Writer
Joined: 25 Aug 2007
Posts: 19
Country: phx, az
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| Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:58 pm Title: |
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| No prob! It did occur to me afterward that you'd probably written other stuff that would explain all that. Right after I read yours I posted something right out of the middle of a book I'm writing that I now realize probably won't make loads of sense... but oh well! |
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kitty15
Epic Novelist
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 4234
Country: England
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| Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 10:28 pm Title: |
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Sounds like the cafe is important 
Heather xx |
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SishBee
Novelist
Joined: 25 May 2007
Posts: 278
Country: England... just says it all...
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| Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 8:30 pm Title: |
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Hey!
Thanks for commenting on my story! 
Love your name by the way!
~SishBee~
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kitty15
Epic Novelist
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 4234
Country: England
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| Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 12:39 pm Title: |
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My apologies dear, I think I do recall a mention of broken glass in that earlier section actually. And I can understand you not wanting to number them. I shall try to make time to critique the one you posted yesterday at some point this afternoon,
Heather xx |
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kitty15
Epic Novelist
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 4234
Country: England
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| Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:13 pm Title: |
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No problem and thanks for the review on my poem =)
Heather xx |
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TL G-Wooster
Epic Novelist
Joined: 07 Feb 2007
Posts: 2910
Country: East by five and by five, south by two and by two, and so down to the beach
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| Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 2:39 pm Title: |
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Hey, cool name! 
*signs in neon-green spray paint*
*adds 328778468 neon green polka dots and 3 pastel blue ones*
See ya round! |
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kitty15
Epic Novelist
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 4234
Country: England
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:36 pm Title: |
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Hi there! Don't worry, I know it can be very difficult to write in a genre that someone has recently excelled in. I've tried it myself in the past. Maybe some description of the two characters would help? If they are physically different from the twins then people wont be so quick to associate them with them. As for double spacing, it's only necessary in non-fiction and doesn't apply where the start of speech is concerned anyway. Normal spacing beside punctuation but double between words if that makes sense. Anyway, feel free to pm me when you've posted the next section,
Heather xx |
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