I am one of those insane people who are good at both math and literary stuff. Scary, isn't it?
No, but seriously, writing has always been my first love and one day, hopefully soon, I hope to publish FREAK, which is my first novel. In the meantime, I am having fun editing it and hanging around here on YWS.
If you want me to critique something of yours, feel free to bug me about it, but you may have to wait for a critique for a while, especially if you want a good one. ;) Also, if I've given you a critique and you don't understand it because I've used too many math references or something (always possible!) just send me a PM and I'll try to explain myself further. :)
Joined: 02 Apr 2008 Posts: 77 Country: Wherever the Cheese, thus shall I follow.
Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 4:07 am Title:
Hey! Thanks for critting "Talk About It," I obviously have some work to do! I think the emotion I was trying to convey sort of got in the way of proper rhythm and line structure. I can't wait to go over it again... I'm sure your review will help bucketloads!
Anyways...
RG