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    Joined:  26 Feb 2007
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    October Girl
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    Joined: 23 Sep 2006
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    Country: WHERE PPL LIVE ON VODKA AND LIME

    Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 5:17 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    hello, I've been, well pretty much pregnant.

    -Max
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    chocoholic
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    Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 10:22 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Exams? Okay, you're off the hook then.

    choco.
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    Kalliope
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    Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:08 am    Title: Reply with quote

    Hey 'Lainna,

    how are you? Thought I'd leave you a smile Smile and one of those awsome pink elephants

    Wink

    ~Kalli
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    chocoholic
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    Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 1:22 am    Title: Reply with quote

    Hey Alainna,

    When's more Lyla coming? I'm getting bored without it.

    choco.
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    Demeter
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    Joined: 02 May 2008
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    Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 8:17 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Yeah Smile And I'd better not forget yours!

    Oh yes, Lion King's adorable! And I tried to read Wuthering Heights but I couldn't really focus on it... Maybe I should try again, I've heard it's good!

    Thank for signing and accepting my friend invite! I can't resist advertising myself; i just submitted my very first writing here. Smile
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    JFW1415
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    Joined: 07 Jun 2007
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    Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 7:50 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    No problem! I actually felt bad, as my critique was so short. The piece definately has potential; I loved it.

    School's not that much better. I have the court hearing Tuesday, and had to take down my blog until then. But one of my (ex)friends finally realized that I wasn't awful by calling the cops, and is speaking to me again. Of course, I won't be as close with her again, but I still like having someone to sit/talk with.

    My migraines are less often, though! Wink

    Glad you like your nickname. Cool

    Oh, and if you'd like another critique, PM me. I love your work; I'd like to read more. (Besides - I owe you! Wink )

    ~JFW1415
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    Demeter
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    Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 6:37 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Oh, I noticed you're only 3 days older than me! That's great Smile Anyway - wanna be my friend?
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    TL G-Wooster
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    Joined: 07 Feb 2007
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    Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 5:26 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Lyla whispered in my ear,
    told me, 'This is it, my dear.
    To find the goal that's true
    and blue,
    I offer this - myself - to you.
    To be critted, that is;
    don't go getting any ideas.'

















    Ooooh, space!
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    ink_on_fire
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    Joined: 09 Apr 2008
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    Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 1:47 am    Title: Reply with quote

    Smile Well, I haven't posted another one yet...but I am working on it.

    I get it up soon.

    I like your avatar alot, it's so pretty.

    Inky
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    ink_on_fire
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    Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:54 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Hey

    Glad you like those flashy things I make, lol.

    *draws a picture because it's not as boring as writing her name*

    Smile
    Bye
    xxx

    Inky
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